American Primitive

Her smudged face in the bathroom mirror,
seen from bruised sheets.
The open mouths of high heels
one face down drunken, the other gaping.

Headlights strafe the curtains,
a scant dress clings to the oily back of a chair.
The room has washed up
on the grey surf of dawn.

She walks back into the room.
Her slip white as bone,
sallow skin dimpled by day-peep.

In the dark, she told you her story
as you drowsed beneath a shadow mind.
You did not want to know her
and now she won’t look at you
as she leaves.

When she’s gone,
you lay for a long time
in your cotton shrouded tomb;
it is way too big for how you feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kalita Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 12:13 PM
I absolutely love the imageries and the metaphors of this poem! Awesome;
Ashford Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much Silpika!
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