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Premium Member October Rain

Is it
simply a case of precipitation,
moist warm air condensation
or are they God’s tears showering us with love,
as rain washes away our sorrows,
in the hope of brighter tomorrows.

Gloomy grey skies conceal a shy sun
with murky dull clouds lingering.
A cornucopia of soggy brown leaves
slither and slide under our feet.
A plethora of rain drops fall capriciously
with no concern for those they disturb.

Ladies shelter under umbrellas appearing morose,
whilst school children splatter in puddles,
laughing and giggling in sheer delight.
The rain is never cold when one is young.

Pollutant auto mobiles drive by monotonously
their passengers are safe as 
windscreen wipers clear their way.
Stores are lit with commercialised displays
as the air fills with excitement for fun that awaits.
In hope the October rain does not dampen their spirits.

Squirrels gather up supplies ready to hibernate.
High above birds fly south for warmer temperatures.

A fragile old leaf falls upon me through the blustery wind,
leading to a philosophical thought about turning over a new leaf.
Lost within the season of change and contemplation,
one thing will never change though – 
the October rain.

The Silent One
originally written 29 October 2015
re-posted 18 October 2017
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: monotonously, autumn, october, rain,
Form: Free verse

Home Collaberation With Silent One

Standing in the heart of this city
in awe of spectacular lights illuminating tall buildings.
Millions of strangers rush to and fro.
Who would've thought I would be here of all places.

But here I am feeling misplaced
in a place where no one knows your name. 

I fasten the winter coat tight 
to keep my heart wrapped warm,
because this city of strangers is so cold.
People wandering like bad actors struggling 
to play their part with faces lacking expression.

Concrete towers seem to imprison me
in a place my soul does not belong.
I walk the same path monotonously,
wondering where it all went wrong.

But here I am feeling lost and alone .
I'm smiling but only to keep the dancing tears at bay.

I can't be someone who I'm not,
nobody seems to appreciate that I'm misunderstood. 

And the dream that brought me here today,
now wants me to return home.

As my naked breath freezes in the air,
for a moment tired eyes close.
A smile sneaks through reminiscing Chamorro dreams.
Bathing under a blazing sun whose rays 
glow through clear azure skies.
Crystal sapphire seas invite my soul
to immerse in tranquil waves,
peacefully admiring pestrel and
shearwater birds soaring high above.

I can almost hear warblers chirping melodic songs 
of home, perched on a parade of paipai and coconut trees.
Scents of colourful plumeria and hibiscus petals 
draw my senses closer to my heart's province.

Old foot prints have now washed away.
How I long to walk on sands of my forefathers,
where loved ones await with open arms.

A major honor to collaborate with Silent One 

             12 January 2018
Categories: monotonously, absence, desire, home, longing,
Form: Prose

Unexpected Joy

My life was droning along, quite monotonously
like a tired, worn-out song... drawling endlessly

Then one day it happened- two whole lives affected
a simple letter was penned, something unexpected

The letter said “How 'bout it? Can we write a poem together?”
I wanted to say “I doubt it” and avoid it altogether

But the letter said it's “more fun” to write in collaboration
so I said “Okay, let's do this” despite my reservations

We picked a topic at random, I didn't know where to start
but as soul-fated chums, we wrote complementary parts

I started in the middle, while she penned beginning and end
when put together, it made us smile- and we were instant friends!

That's how I came to know her- yes, this wise and clever faerie
a friend I love the very best, a creative visionary

Poems only our tribe would “get”... our silliness in synchrony
I am so glad that we have met, I'm sure she would agree

Like loving mothers, we watch enthralled as our muses frolic and play
such wild creations- we love them all, surprised by what they say!



This describes how I became friends with my dear soul-sister, Caren Krutsinger... the first of many awesome people I would meet on the 'Soup!
Categories: monotonously, friendship, tribute, writing,
Form: Rhyme

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Premium Member Home - Collaboration With Akkina Downing

Standing in the heart of this city
in awe of spectacular lights illuminating tall buildings.
Millions of strangers rush to and fro.
Who would've thought I would be here of all places.

But here I am feeling misplaced
in a place where no one knows your name. 

I fasten the winter coat tight 
to keep my heart wrapped warm,
because this city of strangers is so cold.
People wandering like bad actors struggling 
to play their part with faces lacking expression.

Concrete towers seem to imprison me
in a place my soul does not belong.
I walk the same path monotonously,
wondering where it all went wrong.

But here I am feeling lost and alone .
I'm smiling but only to keep the dancing tears at bay.

I can't be someone who I'm not,
nobody seems to appreciate that I'm misunderstood. 

And the dream that brought me here today,
now wants me to return home.

As my naked breath freezes in the air,
for a moment tired eyes close.
A smile sneaks through reminiscing Chamorro dreams.
Bathing under a blazing sun whose rays 
glow through clear azure skies.
Crystal sapphire seas invite my soul
to immerse in tranquil waves,
peacefully admiring pestrel and
shearwater birds soaring high above.

I can almost hear warblers chirping melodic songs 
of home, perched on a parade of paipai and coconut trees.
Scents of colourful plumeria and hibiscus petals 
draw my senses closer to my heart's province.

Old foot prints have now washed away.
How I long to walk on sands of my forefathers,
where loved ones await with open arms.

Silent One collaboration with Akkina Downing
12 January 2018
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: monotonously, absence, angst, home,
Form: Prose

Premium Member The Challenge of Tv

The Challenge of TV
                                   Authored by Chuck Keys


While watching TV in stride
My eyes were stuck inside
Unable to blink or think
     color tone tint secured the link.

The scenes change and grow
While characters ebb and flow
     Happiness vs. Sadness
          Love vs. Madness
               Good vs. Bad
                    Lady vs. Lad
Noise quiet music and war
Movies ads sports and more. 

Monotonously consuming time and space
     Forever deleting brains trace. 
Reading and writing math and science
     Gives life’s basics for actual reliance. 

Escape and reality are a choice for some
     Easily made by those who aren't numb
Life is what's outside the box
     For those who are sly just like the fox.
© Chuck Keys  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: monotonously, life
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Professor Gorey

Professor Gorey
always had a story
filled wit guts and grim
til most folks around these parts
those with their full share of smarts
asked her where she grows her monolithic glory.

Grim Reaper
is not my heart's keeper
and I thank you so for asking
just what I see as our life tasking,
to face our fears as monotheistic sleepers.

Professor Gorey
how could your story
of climatic strangulations
and cataclysmic slaughter of multiple reiterations
do other than make us monotonously snorey?

Earth's story can wake you up
if you drink Her with half-full inducting cup
rather than gulping with competition
while choking for want of cooperation
between what's contracting down 
why's polytheistic up.

What is this mystery
we cannot see?
of breathing ego down while eco-up,
soothing prickly cats by playing gooey pups,
confusing what might become communion
with how we choose to competitively be?

You've asked me well
so I must tell,
my deep gory fertile mystery
of permaculture ecosystemic history
is what makes our regenerating health 
co-evolve so cooperatively swell,
overcoming LeftBrain v RightBraun 
disassociated hell.
Categories: monotonously, creation, culture, dark, environment,
Form: Limerick


Hospital Halls and Walls

I catch a fleeting glimpse of her room from the hall,
my back slams lightly against the wall,
slumping listlessly, my anger out of control.
As she lies in her hospital bed, tubes patrol
in and out of every conceivable opening,
with new vital bodily fluids dripping
monotonously, in time released droplets of life
through the needle pierced veins of my wife.

Abruptly, I feel the cold uncomforting
frigidness of this smooth wall unyielding,
pressing firm against my back, in this hospital hall.
Reality becomes my depression shawl,
covering and smothering all of my senses.
Angrily my muscles push and body tenses
rejecting the insensitivity of these unfriendly walls,
and began repetitious canticle paces
through the drab, inculpable, uncommitting hospital halls.

Tears rush to my eyes flowing furiously,
focused anger colors my face visibly
revealing the naked fury of my livid crimson brain.
My heart beats with the resounding of pouring rain.
Pounding with my self incrimination, as I seek others to blame.
Doctors, Surgeons, God, others must drown in this shame.
Anger rolls through my entire being, allowing no one to console.
This anger is pervasive, it permeates into my soul.

Our oneness is evident, she stirs and I know.
In another universe, I sense a furrow in her brow.
I turn swiftly, my pace quickening to a full stride
at her door and move quickly to her side.
A moan, a gasp, a sigh, a groan, a cough,
but, the medicated trauma flowing through
her inlet tubes, force her back into a heavenly sleep.
I breath a sigh of relief for her and weep.
Categories: monotonously, lifeanger, universe,
Form: Tyburn

Premium Member Politics of Cardiac Arrest

Wealthy thrivers off polarizing put-down strategies
calcify toxic win/lose Capitalization patterns
building up around bicameral governing hearts
of our health-wealth struggling
ebb and flow financial system.

Investment of time and money,
nutrition flowing in established monoculturing directions
tends to stick there,
accumulating ever more fatty tissue,
monopolistic 
monotheistic
monotonously chronic issues
of economic heart failure
ensues hardening of political life's 
systemic trauma arteries.

More polycultural integrity 
of Win/Win co-passion
sustains resonant 
ecologically economic enlightenment
and neurologically healthy 
resilient political empowerment
where monocultural supremacy, 
with stressed-out hardening arteries, 
will fail
to optimally thrive,
while sucking in environmental resources
until formerly healthy families 
and communities 
and species over-consume 
and wilt 
and fail
faster than our interdependent
systemic healthcare replacement rate.

What do starving and thirsty bio-health systems need from you
with you
of you
through you
to share with you
every nurturing grace we could cooperatively contain?

My answer does not end 
with another monotheistic TrumpCard,
or anthro-supremacist 
patristic
industrial ballistic
militarized Capitalistic
retributive justice competition.

These are in dynamic opposition
to all reconnecting religious feelings
and thoughts.

Hearts over-flowing with oppositional power-investment
will only further harden current monotheistic death-trends,
traumatically degenerative 
EarthCardiac arrest
of panentheistically religious 
indigenous 
love-life revival.
Categories: monotonously, culture, health, heart, money,
Form: Political Verse

Nothing

hearing the news
suddenly
taken aback

feelings mix
mingle
a groggy mess
inside
a confused
mind

shocked
surprised
frightened
upset
nervous
anxious

monotonously
quickly
as though
simply
a robot

packing my bags
clothes 
pile
stack
go
up
up
up
seem
neverending

saying goodbye
tears streaming
down frowning cheeks

loading up
suitcases in
boxes in
everything in

key turned
motor going
backing up
crying
sobbing
looking back
for just
one
last
goodbye

gravel crackling
beneath
worn tires
worn souls

paved road
passing under
quickly
coming
then suddenly
going
going
and then

it's gone


there is simply
nothing

nothing but the lonely beat of a hurting heart.
Categories: monotonously, anxiety, depression, divorce, farewell,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Born Again

If, as they say, the cells
of the body are replaced every seven
years, then I'm a new being
since my sons were newborn.
I have died and been reborn
neither better nor worse yet remembering
feeding them while dancing to Moment's
Notice, as they attended with new minds.

Having died, as such, I find I do not mind
quiet living with the purpose of a cell
unbound by minutes or moments
as men know them. There are seven
deadly sins, seven ways of remembering,
seven stages in which to have been or continue being.
None of them recur after one's reborn
and none are known to us from before we're born.

Of the two young people to whom I was born,
one has lately died. I do not so much mind.
Although I do not, he believed he'd be reborn
and who can say what happened to his soul or cells?
Perhaps in Christ we continue being,
or with some other deity, as the churches claim monotonously, momentously,
demonically and deviously. It seems about as relevant that seven
rhymes with heaven and rhyming's a mnemonic device (for remembering).

But remembering
what? To go to the daily discipline to which you were born?
I fought seven forest fires, took seven
lovers, my sons are seven, and my mind
is the sole owner and subsidiary of these memories and moments.
Unless I am to be reborn
they disappear with me. Masefield's poem continues to be
the most honest and chilling assessment of our souls' and cells'

disbursement. I can imagine stem cell
research may lead to a cure for dementia, loss of memory
about who you are and where you've been.
If one's not been born
this doesn't matter. But if you're being reborn,
in the sense of "he not busy being born is busy being reborn" (Dylan),
then it is best and most correct to consider your last moment
of a continuum with moments endless and entirely in your mind.

The mind is made of cells and moments, seven billion of them.
Remember to be born and reborn, early and often.
Categories: monotonously, body, dance, god, heaven,
Form: Verse

Go and Lay An Egg

a 1 2 3 4 is not a 1 2 1 2 nor a 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8....ok then hum....x
A house trained duck could run amok in even the most tightest fitting apron but alchemy weaving leathers are best placed on legs measuring over an acre. It is to be acclimatised to a storm pattern syndrome of striped sun on a grey background but it could also be ascertained that travelling backwards at high speed down a motorway slip road is best achieved carrying one potato, a giant melon tree, and a tricycle. For to dare is to do and to do is to drop dig dreaming dramas dramatically. And to add to such fine grammar one might also assume that a locked gate is as abhorrent as a shut and bolted door. For it is as the horse trots. As the pig whistles. And as the barn creaks. That the fine acrylics begin annual waltzing duties with the glasses of peanut juice. Great. How very marvellous that is. Is it not the hidden virtue of every acolyte that hides the hidden and haves the heaving holders? Is it to be beholden or frenetically ejected via pulsation? The sanctimonious baby sea lion is sat on a third angled throne. In deep contemplation but writing memoirs to a shoal of snowmen is often a worthwhile endeavour. Painful plant pot planting pickles. And a wonderful world wide deity in an orchestrated diagrammatic map. Oh how poignant the points of the programmable playlist playing pianos. And yet the mop moves monotonously and the cloth cleverly cleans. Fantastic news for frog shop fans at a baseball game. Ha. Now send that sponge by rail not plane. Hahaha saviours swinging speedily hahaha Astronaughts and whales balancing. Xxxxx brontosaurus Z z z z
Categories: monotonously, april, arabic, august, baseball,
Form:

Adolescent Years

Immediacy of the moment doth youthful heart beckon
With trite passions that seem to standardize each deviation
Intemperate fodder with which sprouting limbs must reckon
Growing pains producing physical appetites beyond satiation

Carefree days frought with moments of indecision
Sheltered from responsibility; a meaningless depreciation
Time monotonously calibrated; habituated minion
Brokered existence reducing life to borderline depression


A guiding light flickering in the distant future makes a slight 
impression
But wired circuits overloaded with transitory cares leads to 
confusion    
Producing electrical impulses that stimulate internal combustion
Sparking trip wire in mind that produces periods of oscillation

Seeking conformity, a bridge from isolated station
Tring to establish self esteem through peer group ingratiation
To the passing trends, fleeting fads making a necessary oblation
Conversely, using concrete value judgements to qualify each, 
pretentious action
Categories: monotonously, childhood, confusion, life
Form: Rhyme

Beethoven's Death

He hardly heard a distant tune
But he was deaf
And his heart hindered him
Beating in his chest 
Monotonously

He said to it
Please be quiet
Stop
Because I’m not able
To distinguish the notes

And the one that was disobedient its whole life 
Obeyed 
And stopped
© Betim Muco  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: monotonously, life
Form:

Reason Why I Hide Behind Quiet Water

It doesn’t matter if a droplet falling into a pond is early morning dew born from a petal, rain drop gathered from the misty air on one of those gloomy day’s afternoon or simply a flake of weightless snow.  The reason ripples created by such droplets are, not like the surging waters disappearing in a cloud of spray after beating upon the break-water in the air, the commotion of surfs monotonously coming to shore and returning sea disguised in white bubbles left on the sands, come calmly with no affection but simple artless form.

The reason why I like the ripples started from the drop of water on the pond is, they spread as multiple rings come and go without a sound, and therefore, its soundless sound touches my heart as if deep sigh of the long mistreated forsaken men or a pure and clear mind of a man who attained the highest state of enlightenment through deep meditation thereby well understood true meaning of the life and the death.

It doesn’t matter where the ripples come from: an exuviae of 
a dragonfly fell on the pond from wanting to return home where he spent his larva days though an imago flew away long ago to find his mate, a colorful petal faded away when the flower withered after its glorious days were gone, or a leaf, though there is no wind, fell in the pond dawdling for a while because it has to leave on a journey of no return holding a grief of decay.

For the water ring moves only forward and, as if it’s the rings fate, vanish away without expressing emotion of any sort when it comes and touches the shore.  Since the water ring doesn’t have place to return, there is no lingering attachment whatsoever; since it has no need for plausible excuse to justify its existence or nonexistence there would be much easier to live through its given life and leave quietly.
© Su Ben  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: monotonously, death, fantasy, life, water,
Form: Verse

Meditative Alliterations On My Sleep Reality

MEDITATIVE ALLITERATIONS ON MY SLEEP REALITY

From the bed of many meditations
To the stare of a starry eyes,
Into the comforting realm of sound sleep.
Suddenly, I'm hanging out with frosh friend,

Miss Moyin mowing my morning memories.
Now tell me monotonously, 
Is it deep dream voyage 
Or awaken amusement into reality?

Vick Manuel Poetry {VMP}
Copyright © December, 2020.
#OnTheSpotPoetry #PoetKing #PoetSkills #ImpromptuPoem #Alliterations #WordsSmith #vickmanuelpoetry #VMP
Categories: monotonously, 1st grade, dream, writing,
Form: Alliteration
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