Best Meticulous Poems

METICULOUS 

Thom Love Pruett – his effect on absolutely
      everyone around him –
Impeccably dressed
Moderately slight in stature and weight
With features suggesting a certain hauteur    and
With promise of shrill snippiness should he 
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Using drill-sergeant precision,
the tank rolls through the lab
brimming spastic with drive
expedient to mine approval,
displaying can-do gusto
capable of fawning
up the ladder.

Beneath the hood, he charges
headlong into the viral putty
that liquefies somber knees
before hailing forgiveness
for hampering the fiber
set by vast divinity
never denied.

Decades of genetic sampling
present many puzzle-pieces
for...

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Smicklas So Meticulous

That is true about Tom and Marg Smicklas;
About music are marvelous and meticulous
And perfect to last iota, they have to be;
Are an incredible addition to our community.

It could be clarinet, string, bassoon or a reed;
To hear them play everyone does...

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Meticulous and Ridiculous

Writing many poems which may be meticulous 
All could be completely, utterly, literally ridiculous 
And if you have continued to look all around
You might find each one in the lost and found.

From the very first moment that I saw them
I knew they would...

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METICULOUS
 points
of coincidence
 involving
the
earthly
realm
deservedly
 displayed
as
cryptic
utterances
impossible
 to decipher
 based on circles
segmented
 intersecting
divided
so
precisely
 elegant
&minimalistic
with fine
 distinctions
& variation
in complex
 permutations
segregated
in scintillating
flashing
  tilting
then receding
  in theatrical
spirals
& curves
forward
& back
to& fro
the
inseparable
 ethereal
abstract
in
a
revelatory
context
to draw to
attention
  to the
 deeply
absorbing...

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it's late  
a rustic sound bellows      
candles smoke      
making love to the open air      
    
I stare in silence      
as thoughts...

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adventures lengthy
reaching back less possible ~
ants don't lose the way


18 December 2021...

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M-eticulous mind of man 
A-ims to carefully think; 
E-very detail is accurate, as both eyes never blink.

M-eticulous mind all the time 
E-xtremely considers correct information; 
N-ever will it be negligent, 
D-riving away mere speculation. 
O-n the twenty-third of January, 
Z-ealous and scrupulous attention to everything...

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Rose petals fell before us 
Hands slid into each

Evening’s intermittent rays 
Twinkled out a desperate reach.

We took those steps together
Blessed by day and holy night

With gratitude for measured feelings;
Endless love or injured flight

Fortunate ones allowed to share 
A moment, or perhaps a pair.

And when the...

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