Meticulous a Freed Verse
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
METICULOUS
points
of coincidence
involving
the
earthly
realm
deservedly
displayed
as
cryptic
utterances
impossible
to decipher
based on circles
segmented
intersecting
divided
so
precisely
elegant
&minimalistic
with fine
distinctions
& variation
in complex
permutations
segregated
in scintillating
flashing
tilting
then receding
in theatrical
spirals
& curves
forward
& back
to& fro
the
inseparable
ethereal
abstract
in
a
revelatory
context
to draw to
attention
to the
deeply
absorbing
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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