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METICULOUS Thom Love Pruett – his effect on absolutely everyone around him – Impeccably dressed Moderately slight in stature and weight With features suggesting a certain hauteur and With promise of shrill snippiness should he be upset His expectations of those close enough to converse are maniacal And apply equally to self Things have a definite love of geometry Yes! A geometry of things but Just things like A bathroom towel how it hangs just so The kitchen cupboard all things at proper Interval and height You name it Seldom, though, does Thom Love consider flesh another’s feelings One might ask – how can such an outright consistent prig have friends? Well neat-freak Thom Love (never just Thom) holds aces in the monetary and political game If you pucker up your ass-kissing lips and do so with a loving smile Thom Love might, so called, set-you-up He rules the Pruett Tower with a strong but latex-gloved hand And you’d best be dressed with conservative Care Lest Thom Love – known secretly as Pru – will assume his awful prune wrinkled dried apricot stare Blame it on his childhood house – A dwelling of three odd souls – Where all was in dusty dirty array - dinner dishes stacked by a greasy sink floors caked with brown stain did I mention they had many cats? nothing thrown away – books magazines stacked high windows grayed from tobacco smoke I could go on and on Well at 21 Thom Love came into an inheritance from a sane deceased member of the Pruett clan After his parents died in a house fire He vowed to put all around him in proper (geometric) orders Should you run into Thom Love He’ll not shake your hand but Examine your clothes your studs your glasses your watch with gleaming eyes Dave Austin

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Date: 7/15/2017 3:26:00 PM
Yes its me..' Oh how well portrayed Daver I can recognise many self's here maybe some parts of my past-self? but those were put on the shelf..' Damn..' I shall have to fix those brackets.' Can hear an ominous creaaaking..' Whew..' riiit riiit riiit got another screw in; now where was I? yes well done today..'
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Date: 3/30/2017 5:33:00 PM
It sounds like you know him personally Daver. You have drawn a portrait of a man who was shaped by his past and has changed his future because of it. I tend to think that we all do that to a certain extent. I know I certainly have. I enjoyed getting to know him through your poem. Easter Blessings, Connie ; )
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Date: 4/1/2017 10:04:00 AM
But of course some of it is me, but i have a sloppy side too. Love, old daver
Date: 3/21/2017 2:29:00 PM
vivid poetry so well done, daver.. i feel the sting!...huggs
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Date: 3/18/2017 3:06:00 PM
Love the imagery and metaphors here; "prune wrinkled dried apricot stare" Thom Love mustn't be a happy fellow. A crude measurement of people, using a shallow geometric mind. He might have forfeited the crystal pyramid prisms of the spirit, the brilliance of a diamond mind. Even the Essence of one's own personal Mandala; Not to be taken nor exploited. Keep well, stay safe!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:37:00 PM
This is a fascinating character study, DAver. I would not mind coming into an inheritance like your Thom Love!!!
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:45:00 PM
One heck of a portrait, Daver! : )
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