Best Extinguishing Poems


Premium Member Cinder Girl

An ember sparked will softly glow,
and fed by fuel, will grow and grow.
I once was cinder, sparked by you,
first timid. . . till the flames then grew.

And so our start was touch of dawn,
with amber hue, for I was drawn
to eyes so welcoming and warm
I never guessed you’d do me harm.

Like morning glory, love in June
the rapture of mid-afternoon,
romance of which the ancients wrote,
our passion had no antidote.

And with the dusk, though scarlet tinged,
our love began to come unhinged,
for clouds arrived, which filled your eyes,
extinguishing bright twilight skies.

With cold of night came shadows’ pall,
and I could not tear down your wall.
By midnight’s hour, the fire was dead.
Mere ashes smoldered in its stead.

You left, and should you reappear,
I’ve vowed to shun you.  Now I fear
the very thing for which I yearn -
one touch. . . and then again - to burn.
Categories: extinguishing,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Artillery Rain

~Perfect Rain~

I can see!
All the tribulations around
A rage against the burning wind
Nobody hears the crackling sounds in my voice
Everybody avoids feeling the smoke hidden within
A rain so deep it burns all the enamel off my skin
A rain that cut my soul in half
Two-piece that will not entwine or merge down a dragon path
I feel this eternity has no ending blaze
Trigger happy rain, extinguishing a bonfire around my rose.

I will sleep under the artillery stars tonight
With the perfection of my fiery crystal lava teardrops
Washing the ashes of my face,
Suppressing the overwhelming fear
Knowing no one will ever, "BLAME IT ON THE RAIN!" 
As long as the torch keeps loading another artillery round.

~*~
PD
4/12/12
Trashed  #3, sponsor, Broken Wings
Date Trashed November 2nd, 2015
Categories: extinguishing, art, deep, earth, fire,
Form: Dramatic Verse

The Wind

I am the wind

You cannot see me but you can feel me

Breezing gently through your hair

Brushing slightly across your cheek

Whispering softly 'neath your ear

I am the wind whirling,howling,roaring

blowing fiercely against the desert sand

which sifts silently in the hourglass of your soul

I will not fail you,nor leave your side

till you smell fresh rain again

and soak under cascading waterfalls

I am the wind extinguishing wild fire

 which scars the lifeline of your palm

I am the wind blowing whimsically

 in the honey fragrance of each meadow

where you lay beneath a half sun

I breathe  my warmth where your cold  fingers

gather forget-me-not petals

that fall ever so slow

with every drip drop of my fluetish tapping sound

I am the wind,I will carry you to places ,far

I'd tickle your lips with fluttering feathers

of early doves which soar above your  mirthful past

I'd strip your thought bare till I touch that heart

I am the wind wafting by your pillowcase

I play within your dreams 

with each seductive move

Capturing the hour of a star

I linger in the depths of all that once was dark

I pour rose- scented zephyr into your night

and We would never part,No! We'll never part

I am the wind
Categories: extinguishing, love,
Form: Free verse

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Premium Member Silver Solitude on Storm's Edge

I emerged / born with a silver pen in hand
…and a tempest raging within.
Words writhe, a serpent's coil
…tightening their grip
A soul adrift in a sea of 
…self-made iniquity.

I buried my daddy 
…in the black shoe
…by the Yew tree
Yes, I, the beekeeper’s daughter
…bearing the weight of hexagonal cells
A hive of memories
…buzzing with secrets.
The bell jar shattered 
….a fractured hive.
Its glass walls no longer a prison
…but a shattered cocoon
……a metamorphous!
Pain and disdain drip like honey
…a bittersweet nectar of survival.

He, a poet
…crowned in the harsh light of fame
Bound in chains of duty and shame
His words 
…a romance of lure and alarm.
Echoing the sirens' song
…enticing and harmful.
Yet, his tongue 
…a viper’s forked lie.
Whispers truths and half-truths
…conjuring illusions to die.

Wandering the maze of being
A little fugue of 
…fractured fairytales.
Each note a fleeting glimpse of clarity
Lost in the discordant 
…cacophony of life's emptiness.

Like my "Little Fugue" a dance of shadows
A journey through the corridors of the mind
Seeking answers in the interplay of light and dark
Striving for harmony amidst the chaos

Parchment of blood and ink I leave
A riddle of life and death's plea
Maniacal madness with visions slight
A macabre dance upon the night.
Ariel, brings lightning and fire!

With heavy heart
…I sealed my children's room.
Softly kissed them farewell
……Extinguishing the final flame within.
Enveloped in oblivion's velvet veil
………Yielding to the oven’s cold caress.
…………No, more morning songs...

Inscribed a cryptic goodbye
Breathed in the silent slayer.
For, I Lady Lazarus
…Dying is an art
……Faded into the ether…

Her blacks crackle and drag, a fire of new birth
Flames licking at the borders of life
Consumed by oblivion's greedy blaze
Lost in the vast cosmic ray.

The embers die 
…a fleeting spark gone
No masterpiece
…….just dust reclaimed
A silent echo in the void unstained.
A mystery lost
………never quite explained.

Yet, God's Lioness 
...Fierce and Untamed
Roaring her defiance
…Covered in darkness…

----
Underneath the star-strewn skies
A fleeting passing note.
Lost in the vast expanse
Living on the edge
For, I am but a speck of dust.
Categories: extinguishing, mental health, mental illness,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Ice King

My skin petrified, mummifying my hand
upon pools of brittle ice
like curdled blood piercing veins: I watch
the moon bathing its flesh,
 
in crystal yellow, waxing a sheen...
my pores dilate as cubes slowly melt
when this fired orb heals from above

till its velvet breath climbs into my head, 
extinguishing limbo of a daze…until I convulse in joy
when chunk-stone changes into glimmered dew.



*I held ice cubes on my palms and was transported
back to scene of one night when a high fever drowned
my senses… for some reason, viewing the glory 
of the moon relieved me from delirium… 

Ice King Contest of Skat
( in less than 10 lines)
25July2013
by nette onclaud
Categories: extinguishing, pain, uplifting,
Form: Lyric

Premium Member A Quiet Fury

A quiet fury gathered on Horizon’s distant side.
Its merciless intensity was destined to collide
with unsuspecting entities entombed beneath the ground
all huddled ‘neath a canopy, immune to earthly sound.

The timbered crown held steady 'till it met the tempest thrust.
Though some were felled by Heaven’s flogging, others stood the gust.
Malevolent gray shadows rolled and tumbled in the toil
as ominous dark nimbostratus stewed within the boil.

The sky peeled open wide releasing terrifying might
as spears of jagged lightning were unleashed upon the night.
A bolt was hurled from heaven and it found its mark below,
within the silent forest stood one massive tree aglow.

Barbs of lightning pierced its trunk and blew the shards of bark
into arrays of shrapnel as it ripped its limbs apart.
Then torrent rains began to pour upon its ravaged frame
to calm the rage sent from above, extinguishing the flame.

Those mighty winds have faded to a whisper once again,
the Sun returns its solace as it beams across the land.
The silent calm of morning is restored by breaking dawn.
For now the quiet fury from the Heavens has withdrawn.


Host:  Mark Toney
Marathon Contest mile 25
1-19-2020
Categories: extinguishing, allusion, angst, appreciation,
Form: Couplet


Premium Member Days End

The day is done. Travel dispersed, no more roaming.
Between dusk and sunset, it’s the gloaming.

I settle to watch, inspired by that instant moment,
When day gives over to night a regal bestowment.

Lights begin to shimmer, as we near twilight.
Across the horizon created a radiant glow so bright.

This magical moment captured with a deep ruby hue.
Detailing an exquisite hefty crimson etched in view.

Streams of color blend seamlessly in swirls of delight.
Heavily embossed across the faded sky, birds in flight.

Sunset’s glowing color of crimson and gold,
As night’s velvety blanket begins to unfold.

Whispers of a breeze wafting gently, flickers a scent.
Evokes aromatic bursts, sensual yet earthy by intent.

With a sweetness, and a warm tranquil overtone.
I am nestled snugly, captivated by joy I've never known.

Capturing my imagination of a candle in glorious blaze,
My breath extinguishing it to create the dark night haze.
Categories: extinguishing, sunset,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member When Scorpio Goes Dark

Antares' red glow bears firmly down
upon plush, chartreuse carpet
lying prone against the obsidian expanse,
blanketing sections of a remote 
blue sphere, purling,

spinning helplessly 
through distant time and space;
slave to routine and rotation,
never daring to break free; 
to reach out.

Scorpius sprawls low 
across the Autumn void;
a celestial corpse 
twinkling, twitching; 
inexplicably still breathing, 
expelling the last 
of her precious plexine light 
in a final, desperate act

to awake inspiration, stir passion,
proffer wholeness and healing
to an infirmed, ungrateful planet,
for her end-of-reign recession.

Projecting dreams; visions 
like swirling Akashic holograms 
leaping forth from ancient pages 
of ethereal records,
all but lost to time and apathy.

Twisting snakelike through the cosmos,
her broody gaze steeling
in every direction; 
fierce energy bombarding; 
burning across the universe.

Intense joules bursting forth;
reaching out to nurture
willing universal souls;
scorching those who reject her,
turning them to table fodder 
at a divine banquet 
for dark gods.

Sagittarius flickers jovially behind
as if breathless with laughter;
taunting, frustrating,
staying just out of reach 
of her vengeful tail.

The rule of Scorpio wanes
upon Orion's horizontal breach
extinguishing the sting-ed cluster;
quelling her tumultuous surge
until late-spring pains 
rebirth her fires,

igniting them, emerging again
from the icy chasm 
of black oblivion.
Categories: extinguishing, space, stars,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member My Big Fat Cousin's Wedding

My favorite cousin named Marge
is almost as big as a barge.
So one would assume, 
not knowing the groom,
the guy would most likely be large.

But he was a small man named Tim
“As thin as a broom” describes him.
While Marge would guffaw,
Tim would watch her with awe
and just smile for he was so prim!

When the preacher addressed him and said,
“You may now kiss the bride,” Tim turned red,
for their lips could not meet.
With high heels on her feet,
Marge stood towering over his head.

She leaned down while Tim stood on his toes,
but for being in such a strange pose,
Marge then came toppling down
crushing Tim neath her gown
while the whole church erupted in “Ohhhhh’s.”

All was well, and thereafter, we ate;
then we planned next to dance until late.
But none could foresee
the small tragedy
that had us all leaving by eight!

Marge had tossed off her heels for a glide
on the dance floor, but when they both tried
to dance, Tim got snagged
by that dang gown and dragged
as his bride was beginning to slide. . .

Now shoeless, poor Marge could not stop.
Toward a table with candles on top,
they slid, and the groom
then set fire to the room
by landing with a belly flop.

Poor Tim by the candles got lit,
and we were all having a fit,
for the fire got spread fast
till the Best Man at last
got us all wet extinguishing it!

Inspired by the title of the movie: My Big Fat Greek Wedding 
& : Joann Grisetti's "My Cousin's Wedding" Poetry contest
Categories: extinguishing, funny, dance, fire, dance,
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Sorrow O'Er Youth and Young Love Lost


When I look on my life that's now half-spent,
     I sigh the loss of youth that's forever past,
wishing myself better Fortune's consent,
     love, friends, and wealth with naught to lose or waste, 

but for the mean expense of young love lost;
     despising this, I oft' bemoan the loss
of vestal company's first time the most;
     for matrons offend like mouldering moss,

which, like Time's sure, inexorable march,
     destroys the juvenescence of life's spring
year by year till extinguishing Youth's torch,
     a dead flame for which I am most desiring.

If I could live and love anew once more,
I'd not err this time: and lay a rude whore.
Categories: extinguishing, life, loneliness, longing, loss,
Form: Sonnet

Love's Longing

The longing for beloved, like a moth longing for flame,
extinguishing it's own fire, admiring it's own pain,
with the bejeweled beauty of stars and moonlight     
I find you engulfed in the scent of my unforgiving plight. 

The damage your absence did has never been aided,
the scars I have been carrying have never faded.
Your body might be aligned with roses and dust
but I'm still holding onto the blade of proses and lust.
The deeper it cut, the better it turn me into pieces,
for a poor, vulnerable, tortured soul, only left in traces.

Since centuries, conspiracies against you have allied with dove,
agony, misery, calvary, woe, curse, they say, but I opt for love.
Categories: extinguishing, 12th grade, absence, addiction,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Get Ready 1275

“Capturing my imagination of a candle in glorious blaze,
My breath extinguishing it to get ready for the dark night haze.”  The Poet 

Sunset’s glowing color of crimson and gold is in sight,
I settle to watch, inspired by an instant moment, so true.
As lights begin to shimmer, it is now twilight.

Across the horizon created a radiant glow so bright. 
This magical moment captured with a deep ruby hue.
Sunset’s glowing color of crimson and gold is in sight,

Streams of color blend seamlessly in swirls of delight.
Detailing an exquisite hefty crimson etched in view. 
As lights begin to shimmer, it is now twilight. 

Heavily embossed across the faded sky, birds in flight.
I gaze as the sky bids farewell to the last glimpse of blue.
Sunset’s glowing color of crimson and gold is in sight. 

A sweetness of warmth, a tranquil overtone so light,
As the velvety blanket of night begins to unfold so new,
As lights begin to shimmer, it is now twilight.

Whispers of a breeze wafting gently, it flickers a perfume too. 
Evokes aromatic bursts, sensual yet earthy right through. 
Sunset’s glowing color of crimson and gold is in sight,  
As lights begin to shimmer, it is now twilight.
Categories: extinguishing, night,
Form: Villanelle

Premium Member Illusion

“is life an illusion?” ...  

As a young kid, loved the magical illusion... 

With every flick of the hand, a world unfolds, 
Mysteries hidden in stories told, 
Where wonder reigns and logic defies, 
In the heart of magic, the illusion lies. 

As a grown-up kid, illusion took over thoughts .... 

In a world where wands weave dreams so bright, 
Illusions dance in shadows, taking flight, 
With whispered spells and secrets to unfold, 
Magic's embrace reveals the tales untold. 

As an adult, chased illusion every day .... 

As a mature adult, realities started to sink in..... 

A moonbeam drips across my shadow— 
a silver tear on the canvas of night, 
yet it trembles, weightless, 
as though woven from breath, 
a mirage cradled by wind. 

The desert of my mind stretches, 
each dune a memory that flickers— 
a flame extinguishing itself 
in the vast mirror of my thoughts. 

I chase a golden grain of truth, 
curling through fingers 
like sand in an hourglass— 
each bead a moment 
that slipped just beyond recall, 
recalling Poe’s plaintive question: 
is all this “a dream within a dream”?  

Kabir whispered that life 
is but a bubble, a moon’s reflection— 
a fragile orb suspended 
above an ocean of emptiness — 
I catch its image in my gaze, 
yet the bubble bursts before I know its name. 

Silhouettes of truth shimmer— 
a forest of fractal whispers dancing 
with branches that fold into themselves — 
reality unfurls and folds, 
a kaleidoscope in the mind’s eye. 

In this hall of mirrors 
I press my palm against glass— 
feeling warmth 
that dissolves into cool air, 
a phantasm of made-believe. 

Still, I wander through the echo— 
where light splits into shards of phantom hope— 
and learn, as Amy Lowell watched the beetle hide— 
how beauty flees when chased . 

In the end, illusion is not an absence, 
but the prism through which we see— 
and even as it fades, 
its fragments paint the world 
with wonder.
© Jay Narain  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: extinguishing, inspirational,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Around The Campfire

Rising from the fire like a phoenix,
hot cinders morph into crimson darts.
And shadows roam the fringes of light,
extinguishing any fledgling sparks.

Scarlet splashes in the molten flames
as cerise and chartreuse ride the waves.
And all eyes follow their rhythmic flow,
for their hypnotic beauty enslaves.

Bursts of laughter and bravado bond
in the scary tales that haunt the night.
And comradery clamors to be heard,
amongst everyone huddled up tight.

Tranquility's intoxicating,
pacifying your soul with its peace.
And it feels like genuine magic
when worries and anxieties cease.

A brotherhood fuels the campfire,
united by its flickering flames.
And fragile friendships rekindled;
are free from frustration and life's games.
Categories: extinguishing, adventure, beautiful, color, feelings,
Form: Quatrain

I Am the Wind


I  am the wind

You cannot see me ,but you can feel me

breezin' gently through your hair

Brushin' slightly across your cheek 

Whisperin' softly 'neath your ear

I am the wind , whirling , howling

roaring fiercely   against the desert sand

 which sifts silently through  

the hourglass of your soul.

I will not fail you, nor leave your side 

till you smell fresh rain again

and soak  under cascading waterfalls. 

I am the wind ,extinguishing  wild fire 

which scars the lifeline of your palm.

I am the wind , blowing fragrance 

in the honey  of each meadow

where you lay down  beneath a half sun .

I breathe  warmth where  your cold fingers

gather forget-me -not petals, that fall ever so slow

with every drip drop of my fluetish tapping sound.

I am the wind , I will carry you to places , far...

I'd tickle your lips with fluttering feathers  of early doves

that soar above your mirthful past.

I'd strip your thought bare till I touch your heart.

I am the wind wafting by your pillowcase

I play within your dreams  ,with each seductive  move

I capture the hour of  a  star.

I linger in the depths that once were dark

I pour rose-scented  zephyr in the alleys of your night

Then I leave , I leave to return closer

Closer enough to let my song  reveil  your sight.




For Personification Contest ,sponsored by Lewis Raynes.
Categories: extinguishing, beauty, wind,
Form: Personification
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