The Wind

I am the wind You cannot see me but you can feel me Breezing gently through your hair Brushing slightly across your cheek Whispering softly 'neath your ear I am the wind whirling,howling,roaring blowing fiercely against the desert sand which sifts silently in the hourglass of your soul I will not fail you,nor leave your side till you smell fresh rain again and soak under cascading waterfalls I am the wind extinguishing wild fire which scars the lifeline of your palm I am the wind blowing whimsically in the honey fragrance of each meadow where you lay beneath a half sun I breathe my warmth where your cold fingers gather forget-me-not petals that fall ever so slow with every drip drop of my fluetish tapping sound I am the wind,I will carry you to places ,far I'd tickle your lips with fluttering feathers of early doves which soar above your mirthful past I'd strip your thought bare till I touch that heart I am the wind wafting by your pillowcase I play within your dreams with each seductive move Capturing the hour of a star I linger in the depths of all that once was dark I pour rose- scented zephyr into your night and We would never part,No! We'll never part I am the wind

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Date: 2/29/2020 12:49:00 PM
Hello Charmaine Chircop, so nice to meet you.I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/23/2015 9:55:00 PM
vivid imagery lovely write
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:58:00 AM
Reminds me of something I wrote years ago. Beautiful once again! Think I'll throw my fav poet list! 7 btw...
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Date: 1/12/2015 8:04:00 PM
hi Charmaine,excellent poem,great personification-the wind bringing fresh rain,extinguishing fire breathing warmth,making petals fall with every drip drop of its fluetish sound-reminds one of Shelley'sWild West Wind.Congrats
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:50:00 AM
hi charmaine congrats enjoyed reading ur poem ,it is rich in imagery,difficult to say" which I liked best but still my favourite is petals falling 'with every drip drop of my fluetish tapping sound'
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Date: 12/10/2014 1:03:00 PM
A wonderful poem from which I rested in the verse:"I play within your dreams" What happens when the two winds meet?
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem with such vivid imagery. Great write Charmaine.
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Date: 11/30/2014 11:13:00 PM
Lovely work Charmaine, you have a sense of being in the wind with your words. I submitted a poem called the WIND and I was quite surprised to see and read your poem. Thanks for the read. Kev
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Charm, but most of all on the beautiful lines that form this enchanting poem. I'll think of you every time I feel the wind blowing across my face! A top rating once again! // paul
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Date: 11/14/2014 11:58:00 PM
Thanks so much to all dear friends xxxx
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:33:00 PM
Very beautiful imagery with great use of personification....a fav for me. Congrats on being POTD!
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:49:00 PM
truly a superb piece of writing charmaine well deserved poem of the day golden pen dear friend
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:03:00 PM
i love your poem.
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Date: 11/14/2014 5:48:00 PM
very nice Char... awesome POTD... just like to blow some love your way...
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Date: 11/14/2014 4:35:00 PM
Charmaine, congratulations on Poem of the Day; a beautiful write :) eve 7 and Fav.
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:22:00 PM
Charmaine, A most superb poem!! Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Most well-deserved!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful..."I linger in the depths of all that once was dark"...very good poetic line...Thank you very much dear...
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Date: 11/14/2014 12:35:00 PM
I love it!
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Date: 11/14/2014 10:10:00 AM
What a beautiful choice for poem if the day. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/14/2014 9:44:00 AM
A poem to be read and reread! Congrats on poem of the day. A 7 from me
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Date: 11/14/2014 8:35:00 AM
Your personification of the wind, the style and the depth are all extraordinaire . . . but what I liked most was the enchanting sound the wind-words may upon and through my heart. . . you are gifted my dear friend. May the wind always fill your wings --
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:35:00 AM
Charmaine , here wind is the metaphor for God..Brahma -Vishnu-Rudra trinity-omniscient, omnipotent, omnipresent. This one deserves accolade. Love XXXX rajat PS. It is one of the brightest in my fav. list.
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:00:00 AM
This is just an excellent write Char. I love it. Congratulations on having this little gem chosen as poem of the day.
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:16:00 AM
again, you shimmer with this breezy write, charms.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:58:00 AM
Congrats on this beautiful showcase....hugs
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