Ice King

My skin petrified, mummifying my hand
upon pools of brittle ice
like curdled blood piercing veins: I watch
the moon bathing its flesh,
 
in crystal yellow, waxing a sheen...
my pores dilate as cubes slowly melt
when this fired orb heals from above

till its velvet breath climbs into my head, 
extinguishing limbo of a daze…until I convulse in joy
when chunk-stone changes into glimmered dew.



*I held ice cubes on my palms and was transported
back to scene of one night when a high fever drowned
my senses… for some reason, viewing the glory 
of the moon relieved me from delirium… 

Ice King Contest of Skat
( in less than 10 lines)
25July2013
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 11:35 AM
Creative winnning work..Uniquely you..Congrats..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Enjoyed reading again, congratulations.
A   Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Nette, a wonderful win... congrats in the ice king contest.. Linda
Otoole Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:42 PM
Congrats too on your great winning poem liked this a lot nice work much love Brian o
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:09 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Nette! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 1:58 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, NETTE! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~
Lamoureux Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 8:22 AM
I love where you went with this one. What an excellent piece you have crafted. I think SKAT will love it.
Devnath  Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 10:25 AM
It's an excellent poem written from your practical experience. You have depicted a beautiful picture with wonderful realization by your magical words. It's my one of favorite poem enlisted today. Enjoyed a lot, my friend. Loved always, bl
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 8:46 AM
Wow!!This is outstanding poetry from you Nette.I love your approach here.
Austin Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 8:21 AM
The Moon puts a surreal touch to this opus, nette. My teeth chatter just thinking about it. Good, good stuff. Love, daver
Nair Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Hi Nette, you make a mere ice cube look so lustruous,.. great !!
Chircop Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 1:14 AM
chunk stone changes into glimmered dew-Its like a simple verse changes in the beauty you create sweet lady
Sivey Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:53 PM
"[I watch] the moon bathing its flesh," Wow, now that is a tremendous and wondrous line my friend! You have impressed me yet again with this phenomenal poem Nette! Interesting how you went back to that time of your life that was numb, where you barely felt anything...then the moon came to save the day, I can see that! I really loved reading this lovely piece this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
Goff Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:23 PM
"till its velvet breath" wow! How did you write such wonder?! Amazing! Jimbo
Mohammed Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Wow! Wow! Wow! I expect nothing less from you.Amazing!You're one of my favorites here.Hugs
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:18 PM
I feel more than the words say. This is such a fine write. WOW!
Tacito Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Like the ice in your hand, I, too, melted as I read this. Damn fine job!!!!
Neels Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 12:31 PM
Wow; stunning imagery Nette. Loved every line tonight. Hope your Friday will be an awesome one ;) hugs Wilma
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Woooow ..... fantastic as always! - Viewing image .... it is very well written!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise;)
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 12:10 PM
beautifully imagery love it Shadow x smiles
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