I Am the Wind

I am the wind You cannot see me ,but you can feel me breezin' gently through your hair Brushin' slightly across your cheek Whisperin' softly 'neath your ear I am the wind , whirling , howling roaring fiercely against the desert sand which sifts silently through the hourglass of your soul. I will not fail you, nor leave your side till you smell fresh rain again and soak under cascading waterfalls. I am the wind ,extinguishing wild fire which scars the lifeline of your palm. I am the wind , blowing fragrance in the honey of each meadow where you lay down beneath a half sun . I breathe warmth where your cold fingers gather forget-me -not petals, that fall ever so slow with every drip drop of my fluetish tapping sound. I am the wind , I will carry you to places , far... I'd tickle your lips with fluttering feathers of early doves that soar above your mirthful past. I'd strip your thought bare till I touch your heart. I am the wind wafting by your pillowcase I play within your dreams ,with each seductive move I capture the hour of a star. I linger in the depths that once were dark I pour rose-scented zephyr in the alleys of your night Then I leave , I leave to return closer Closer enough to let my song reveil your sight. For Personification Contest ,sponsored by Lewis Raynes.

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Date: 9/17/2023 10:43:00 AM
I feel you from thousands of miles away. A comforting west wind. Warm, refreshing, not harsh or damaging. "I play within your dreams..."
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/19/2023 12:43:00 PM
So kind
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/18/2023 2:46:00 PM
And joy
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/18/2023 4:47:00 AM
Thanks so muxh for the beautiful comment.Im glad the playful wind bringis comfort to you.
Date: 12/19/2016 1:58:00 PM
Oh my friend, this was absolutely gorgeous and such a poetic gentle breeze upon my mind today. I see what you mean and I love it. Your are the wind, I am winter, we always return. I am once again amazed by your talent and the visions you can create with words. I could feel this poem as it touched me deeply today. An enchanting piece of art that is so beautiful.
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Date: 10/24/2016 5:05:00 AM
I could see through wind's nature more clearly, as I read your poem.....it is picturesque!!! Congrats Charmaine, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/20/2016 1:04:00 AM
Hi Charma, I enjoyed how you so eloquently "spoke" from the winds perspective. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:49:00 PM
Re-reading your beautiful poem. Awesome : )
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:00:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:21:00 PM
Fantastic personification, Charmaine... Closing 8 verses solid gold.. A7
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Date: 11/2/2015 6:33:00 AM
Lovely wind poem, I can feel it blowing.
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Date: 10/16/2015 10:40:00 AM
:)
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Date: 10/16/2015 10:39:00 AM
You seem to be much more than the wind, Charmaine, for without you, where would it go? I just blew in and was blown away! I forgot to 7 the last poem i reviewed, so this one is getting a 14. (Shhhhhh....)
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Date: 10/11/2015 4:48:00 PM
Top marks for this excellent personification, Charm. I love the wind and all the reactions and emotions it manages to elicit. ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 10/6/2015 7:34:00 AM
Hi Charmaine. This is a wonderful poem that you have shared with us. I have thought of the wind many times and the secrets and stories that it holds. The way that it enters into our lives and consciousness and touches us has been brought to life in your poem and I truly did enjoy reading it..... Robert.
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Date: 10/5/2015 8:01:00 AM
Stunning images Charmaine!
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Date: 9/30/2015 12:06:00 AM
Excellent. Nice descriptions on the wind. Well penned too. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/29/2015 9:49:00 PM
magical and enticing xoxoxo
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Date: 9/29/2015 2:49:00 PM
I simply Love the wind....and how it blows out your pen....refreshing as always....for this poem you deserve hoorays....;)
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Date: 9/29/2015 11:17:00 AM
LOVE IT SUCH IMAGERY LIKE THE VERSE THANKYOU FOR YOUR KIND POEMS ON MINE DAVIDSCOTTXX
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Date: 9/29/2015 9:17:00 AM
The images quicken, leaving the reader with time-stopping joy! Wonderful poem, Char! jimbo
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:55:00 AM
Really nice descriptions on the wind Charma, With different ways of expression, Loved it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 9/28/2015 7:06:00 PM
So many beautiful lines Charma.To strip.his thought bare til you touch his heart. That is love. I loved this when you first wrote it and I love it even more now.... A fave.
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Date: 9/28/2015 4:13:00 PM
absolutely stunning personification Charma a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx
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