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Premium Member The Legacy of Law - Part One -

Law began by living,
locomotion meeting the rails of electric rainfall,
Consequence coursing through interconnected crossbeams
making all form fruit of the first & final recipe,
one great statute spawned from the storm
billowing from Divinity's genius,
everything in the Universe existing to produce,
get busy, get bounce'n, grow wild & now,
receive with wisdom and take as thieves humbled by offering,
the original impulse from a manic God
pregnant from androgonous purpose,
a trillion movements in a single start, a fanatic for feral smarts,
stagnation anethema to the spectacular suspense of survival,

Natural Rights were for me
the moment my blood became mine, became a wet warlord
exerting presence in the wide open wrestle of Universe,
God the shadow & weight of my spark,
the window & scene of my good gumption, of my dusty dream,
self defense a mandate from the magistrate of my heritage,
freedom of expression an obligation humming from ancestors'
anniverseries applauded along the Appain Way headed
not towards Rome but forward to a higher home of honor,

a Law unto myself I am,
eating from the spines of lions,
sleeping atop pyramids built by a billion bones unbroken by battle,
afternoons auction affection for my amusement with discount
and the nights nudge nightmares asunder
with the release of red lightning
spelling the name of Creation in raw neon, breathtaking breakdown,
a script scribbled by a hand having the blueprint of dirt in it's fingernails,
I appeal to Adam, attest in favor of aggression's willpower,
to Eve I beseech, testify to the severity & sanction of self confidence,
let us smash all false law that stands as a wall to our fulfillment,
smack the eggshell of Man's authoritarian angst,
waking into a world of wakeful worries, confined by Common Law, U.C.C.,
walking through waves ment to wreck the arrogant
with a constitution inked by nerves electrified
by entertaining the urgency of a rampaging God,
thought of the great expanse thumping thoroughly through
the expeditions my expectations encounter,
black static undulating around the blue bulb of my brain,
sparks of ultimate consciousness mothering marks of miracles
in the becoming of birthright,


J.A.B.
Categories: exerting, adventure, universe,
Form: Epic

Premium Member Ascent

wholly
utterly
completely
devoting
dedicating
committing
striving
exerting
straining
victory 
triumph
conquest
smiling
grinning
beaming
gratitude
appreciation
acknowledgment
modesty
humility
prayer
Categories: exerting, appreciation, dedication, devotion, prayer,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Sub-Atomic Particles

Sub-atomic particles
the atoms they form
molecules, cell organelles
cells, machinery of life
organs, organisms
communities and ecosystems
planets, solar systems, galaxies
galactic clusters and their inverse
black holes the doors to other
universes, a contradiction
in terms.
             For language and its shadow
consciousness must hold matter
the material world snugly inside concepts
theories and hypotheses to be
experimentally verified using vision
and the other senses, collecting data
and interpreting the known facts
accumulated over time.
                                 Can matter
exist without a consciousness to behold it?

Believing in
our mortality (the species)
we have created God
(a supreme being)
probably not carbon-based
to encompass every universe
but is God
inside or outside
consciousness? Can God
tell us what to do
or must we tell God
alone
what to do?
                 Here is ego
projecting personality, exerting force
on community, asserting the existence
and predominance of component DNA.
An already hackneyed theory that DNA
survival drives
procreation, personality, savings bonds
everything but poetry (most poems included).

Mustache, cowboy hat
horse whisperer, gulag master
Odysseus, King Lear
                            salvation in the details.
Yes, these personalities individual and interesting
as opossum, bear
oak and ash
beech nut, pine cone
Grand Canyon sandstone, Green Mountain granite.
Categories: exerting, community, earth, god, language,
Form: Verse

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Premium Member Words of Fate

When my pen hits the paper 
I grow anxious and eager to write another caper
Steadily and gracefully then I lift my pen
I ponder with my thoughts on subject matter and where to begin
I hunger for one last metaphorical rhyme
As my thoughts race to my fingers, words form into sentences line after line
As a child of destiny I accept my fate
I have a lifetime of transgressions that awaits
So many words are buried deep in my sympathetic soul
The metaphoric rhyming words and phrases start to flow 
Right away I start to contemplate and calculate
My words have to inspire and its meaning has to have weight 
I will never stop from exerting my efforts, this is a must
God only knows how to guide us
We all know that evolution is inevitable 
Also that nothing is contingent and coincidental
Our faults are no secret, despite our mistakes His love will never abate
To be honest our destiny is ours and we control our own fate

Actions are the seed of fate deeds grow into destiny. 
Harry S Truman

A man's character is his fate. 
Heraclitus

I'm not somebody that thinks about destiny and fate, but I don't walk away from it when something unfolds. 
Angelina Jolie
Categories: exerting, adventure, destiny, faith, journey,
Form: Rhyme

Old Men In Sports Cars

I just finished flipping the calendar to March
I keep a paper one hanging on my kitchen wall 
despite everything being digital 
I’m old school some would say
How is it each day I’m at work every minute I'm there 
passes like an old woman with a walker running a marathon 
while months and years fly by like fighter jets breaking the sound barrier
Life is like that ride at the amusement park shaped like a silo that spins 
slowly at first, the velocity incrementally increasing 
until the world becomes a blur
finding yourself pressed against the wall by an unseen force
unable to move a muscle without exerting extreme effort
My birthday is a little more than two months away
I don’t feel old or look anything like I imagined (and feared) I would 
when I was in my early twenties and forty seemed like such an ancient age
I'm older than my parents were when they became grandparents
making my entrance into this world when they were only teenagers
in the early hours of that late May morning
I was a bit older though too young as well 
when I took up the mantle of mother
When you have no hope you cling to anyone that pays attention 
in order to feel you have any worth
that you matter to someone even if only for a few precious minutes
I’m reminded of men I’ve seen who are likely in their sixties
their silver hair, if they have any at all, blowing in the wind 
as they race down the road behind the wheel 
of a brand new expensive sports car they had aspired to own 
since they were sixteen but can only now afford to buy
who will soon find themselves waking up to the fact 
that some dreams left unfulfilled for too long grow stale 
realizing it isn't the thrill it would have been back then 
when women would have paid equal attention to both car and driver
each complimenting the other instead of such a stark contrast
reselling it a year or two later concluding it’s not worth the expense 
investing those funds in a pre-paid funeral and life insurance
Categories: exerting, age, car, dream, grandparents,
Form: Free verse

Bezirke

“Bezirke”



Bit by bit 
we build our walls
strict little districts
to pin our minds on
and keep the paper tigers out

Political Romantics
counting sheep 
and numbers 
we walk in our sleep
dreaming of doors

Opening inward
externally we are Bezirke
socialised in a stolen concerto
solo instruments with flat musical 
composition, indoctrinated

sucked in
sucked up
hypnotised 

by the totalitarian state
for our best interests 
mesmerised
moving our hips
licking their lips

Bit by bit
we build our walls 
Strict little districts
to pin our minds on
and keep the paper tigers out

(LadyLabyrinth / 2020)



“Brandenburg” / Apparat
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=crdqTf8ZnKQ 







"A Hive Mind has no need for each individual part to have a positive idea of the whole, and to then repress its own inclinations by means of this idea. But in human totalitarianism, this is the central phenomenon, because they are all performing the same internal repression."



"The term “hive mind” refers to the apparent intelligence that emerges at the group level in some social species, particularly insects like honeybees and ants. ... Clearly the assimilation of human into a hive mind is supposed to be a bad thing, according to the writers of Star Trek: a unified consciousness or intelligence formed by a number of alien individuals, the resulting consciousness typically exerting control over its constituent members."









1. Bezirke/German

2. Totalitarianism

3. Covid19/Monitoring:
    http://a.msn.com/01/en-au/BB12Bbym?ocid=se2

4. Orwellian
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Orwellian

5. Mass Surveillance
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mass_surveillance

6. The Hive Mind: 
https://majesticequality.wordpress.com/2010/06/13/on-our-fear-of-the-hive-mind/ 

7. Paper Tiger
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paper_tiger
Categories: exerting, freedom, future, humanity,
Form: Free verse


Kept Hidden In a Closet

I walk into my room every day 
seeing that closet. I wake up 
and I think in my mind "there's 
that sin."
It's a eternal evil, it's clawing at 
the door, gnawing at my skin, 
growing and groaning more and 
more. 
It's big and ferocious, my past 
life it is. It's mean and scary 
and I can never win.
My broken past met with my 
brain and made memories, I 
can't let go of this pain that is 
forever chasing me.
I tried chaining it up, I try 
holding it down, but it's no use!
My strength is no match for its 
conviction and blood-shot 
reproof.
I can't take this anymore, this 
isn't fair! I'm not even that 
person anymore and yet there 
are scars I bare.
Manipulating, hideous, 
tormenting, dangerous.
This present evil is tied at my 
doorstep, tied at my post.
I want to burn it at the stake, 
and leave the ashes to rot. I 
want to forsake it so bad, but I 
know it will forsake me not.
This terrible folly can go on no 
longer, I've made no deals with 
the devil and this is too much. 
I need something, or someone 
to take this animal away so it 
will stop hurting me.
I need an exerting of a pain-
free peace, I need an excreting 
of this soul-eating disease, I 
want to be free!

God*** 

Daughter, Daughter! I'm right 
here. I'm right by your side. 
I've never left you, all through 
your lows and even through 
your highs!
You see that evil that gets at 
you, you see that pain that 
won't escape you, I can take 
that off your shoulders.
Ill make it to where that 
burning flame of evil is nothing 
but a dying smolder.
I can take that evil away but 
you must give me your past. 
I can take that pain away but 
this battle must be your last.
Give me the reins and ill drive 
it away,
Give me your darkness and ill 
give you another way. 

Gods cares about your pain,
He cares about your struggles.
He has no fear in anything and 
there's nothing too big for him to 
battle.
He will take your sin down, 
pumbled to the ground.
He'll make it look simple, like 
popping a small pimple on the 
face of your destiny,
Because he's got everything, 
under control. 
So give him full custody to your 
past, and he'll give you a 
limitless future.

-Elizabeth Cary
Categories: exerting, fear
Form: Rhyme

Pronounced Side Effect Upon My Dreams

Pronounced side effect upon my dreams...
courtesy Fluoxetine hydrochloride

Fluoxetine Hcl (C17H18F3NO·HCl)
known as Selective Serotonin
Reuptake Inhibitor (SSRI),
especially prescribed to treat
depression, panic disorder,

and obsessive-compulsive disorder
the above symptoms
profoundly experienced by yours truly
said prescription medication
seriously impacts sleep (mine).

Debilitating panic attacks
wrought (particularly years gone by)
physiological displeasures chiefly constituting
vertigo, racing heart, nausea,
excessive perspiration, adrenaline
coursing thru body,

whereby Prozac (brand name regarding
aforementioned synthesized chemical)
ameliorated unbearable, unmanageable, untenable...
earth-shaking, devastating, 
and crushing manifestations
disabling, exhausting, jackknifing... functionality
hijacking life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness.

Essentially yours truly experiences
dilemma analogous to sleep deprivation,
cuz ofttimes upon arising,
I feel utterly tuckered out, exhausted, bushed...
thus zapped body, mind and spirit

ill suited to physical,
mental or spiritual endeavor
subsequently lovely bones (mine)
(pine to join grateful dead)
rather than feebly kickstart
lame effort to write, read or meditate.

Thus respecting Sir Isaac 
Newton's first law of motion
a (human) body at rest 
inertia keeps said entity at rest.

Interestingly enough as
daylight doth wax and wane
casting dark shadows upon urbane
countenance buzzfeeding hidden reservoir 
exerting estimable energy 
decreasing arduous strain

therefore purposefulness,
I seek renewable resource to imbue
garden variety generic
doubting thomas and ordain
him (i.e. me) with spontaneous

magnificent grandiloquent enlightenment
ala Orson Welles Citizen Kane
laughable comparison linkedin
with story extraordinaire quite insane
September 4th, 2020 insight one can gain
perchance even coaxing passable poem
from deep within Matthew Scott Harris' brain.
Categories: exerting, adventure, confusion, imagination, journey,
Form: Free verse

Transcend

Epiphanic jubilance as you begin exerting pharmaceutical control over your mental chemistry. You start to see that radiant joy, manic despair, mild boredom and every other “feeling” are merely patterns of chemiconeural-synaptic-firings—patterns that are now under your control. You’re the Head Mental Music Composer. And now you’re turning the broken cassette tapes of trite cover-band grunge beats into a live-blasting supernoval symphony of Mozart on crack:
Shift all incoming experiential data to a cosmic perspective of organismal meta-consciousness…Species consciousness…Genus consciousness…Family Consciousness…Order Consciousness…Class Consciousness…PHYLUM Consciousness…KINGDOM CONSCIOUSNESS!
Blast-off. Simultaneons of Valhalla perspection. Words have ceased to mean. You are now communicating directly with the laws of physics. Your thoughts are angels that fly with wings of ethereal mega-competence.
© Anon Umus  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: exerting, paradise, religious, perspective,
Form: Prose

Premium Member Peculiar Passage

The walls open their eyes just as
the mantises begin to weave
a loving celestial vibe, incensing
the onset of this boundless drive
Not questioning if one will retain
sentience, escaping for a time
confinement within her hive

machine-like serpentine's 
propel mega metallic craft
exerting complex, magically carved
oaken ores 
opening dimensional gateways
ascending straight-through
intensified vibrational planes 
utilising the great wave
unlocking these secret doors

Fantastic crystal-blue eyed 
gnomes with iridescent feather 
shaped cheekbones perform 
a dance, whilst oscillating 
their elongated gold spoons

Traces of a nameless ancient face on
innumerable orange-pinkish moons
within vast space, divinely harmonised
eternally ringing out in high tune
© Tidy Desk  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: exerting, beauty, cool, moon, space,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member A Meaning For Each Day

A MEANING FOR EACH DAY

The long-distance run begins again
From its dawning burst upon
The route of each unique day —
Evolving, exerting, energizing, elating.

The far distances: a crossing from
Vague inspirations to verses, persisting
Like the birds that squawk at treetops,
Wondering how their cousins sweetly sing?

The deepest longings prayerfully
Reach up: 
   thought to motion,
With the blessed guidance to rise 
Out of self: 
   from kernel to cosmos—

Like a Phoenix springing to a marathon
Flight across continents with 
   sea waves mirroring the soar and
Gracing spread wings
With strength for the unfolding search.

Our earth-born lives, bearing 
  our spirt quests may
Bloom into a growing of faith, 
   and to a consequential want
To follow in Christ’s deliberate,
Loving footsteps…Fully perceiving

Others while the run of hours 
   …pauses
To touch the Shepherd…
Learning that starting points and finishing
Lines are neither one beyond us…

By inches or instants,
Wearing our inherited, 
   ancient, wind-lifted capes, our
Every step taken, and hope given teaches:
Meaning is the bed
   of the very paths 
      we choose to walk.

———————————————————-

(C) sally young Eslinger 1/22
Categories: exerting, bird, christian, imagery, joy,
Form: Free verse

A Robbed Scholar

"Pack the chairs,no souls will be entertained here",
Politics is stealing the future of scholars,
The faith is rather picking blemishes from religious pillars,
Can't make it plain to them of my changed mind,
Grew up along the coast,
Education wasn't a key boast,
Chasing money and abiding to words from our illiterate parents,
"Hey,...if you refuse to go fishing,no food for you today",fear really got itself filled us with adherents, 
The punishment comes always with fatality, 
What is known to be risky,we see it to be easy,
Trained with marshal laws,...and it's the powerful canes form masters in the halls, 
Privileged men went ahead to acquire knowledge,because they had all it carried, 
Knew what is meant by a treasure buried,
Fought tediously to overthrow the whiteman ruling over their integrity, 
When nothing was induced much into us,eyes were opened to plenty,
Disappeared from home to where no man ever had an idea about,
Saved by a richman but lonely hunter mouse ,
Impacted into me in-depth understanding, 
Showed me the realities of life;formal education without a payment,
"God bless his hidden soul",
Returned after so many years,
"Life is now precious and exerting greatness of me,
Society wasn't able to exercise recognition of who I am,
But yet still,I found my childhood friends fighting for success with grey hair",he noted well,
Expression on their faces proves their lost in the middle of nowhere, 
Hailing his superiority among them,he was appointed as the chief advisors brain,
So many opportunities he gained, 
His life was a breakthrough to the land he was born to cater,
He is a refined gold within a polluted water,
Inculcated intelligence into his fellow people scoop,
Few took it wholeheartedly;they had eyes for pride so they've made it in a bloom,
Politics practically went about chewing the learned knowledge as strict, 
Coping with internal and external institutions,he raised a fine district,
But,his heart never desired for a truth;
What were deceptions to uproot?
Helmet of glory,
Passion for God plays the background of his officialdom, 
Only blink of eyes taking a yawn,religion stole his referendum.
Categories: exerting, allegory, bereavement,
Form: Alliteration

Premium Member Making Love To Jennifer Anniston

After the Dominican with it's heat and humidity

This is absolute heaven on earth

Temps in the low seventies with bright sunny skies

AND NO HUMIDITY

Humidity's a killer as you all well know

You can be sitting absolute still

Not exerting yourself even the tiniest wee bit

And still the sweat could be running down your face

On men, it's manly

On women, it's against the law

For exhibiting such unladylike tendencies

Women don't sweat... they perspire

Bull crap! They sweat just like us guys

Given the choice, though

I'd rather perspire to death

Than burn to death... no contest

But when you get right down to it

I'd really rather pass away making love to Jennifer Aniston



© Jack Ellison 2014
Categories: exerting, humorous,
Form: Narrative

Sexualizations 4

Shake all those weights off of your form,
Exerting your power of will.
Xenobiotic fabrics fill
Unseen voids that should be the norm.
Activity creates a storm,
Leaving you all wet from the spill
Inside out, because of the thrill
Zippers create within your dorm.
Acting on operating parts,
These movements define the pleasure,
Increasing the beating of hearts.
On my voyage to your treasure,
Natural motions strike like darts,
Sending you strokes in all measures.
Categories: exerting, love
Form: Italian Sonnet

Still I Hold My Head Up High

Still, I hold my head up high 
And why you might ask 
It was not I that left, but she 
I wear no mask 
My deeds are opened 
My life is before you 
I loved only her at the time 
Perhaps her love never grew 
Still, I hold my head up high 
As she hides from the masses 
Although some in secret she sees 
We call them the asses 
Other know her better 
But quiet is their voice 
Perhaps leverage was used 
And they no other choice 
Still, I hold my head up high 
As she is out flirting 
She is bringing herself down 
No words am I exerting 
Let the deeds resolve the deeds 
Let the blind lead the blind 
Strong drink will soon open up 
Her words and her mind 
Still, I hold my head up high 
As drunkenness is now talking 
No better way for words to fall 
With a blackboard for her chalking 
At last she echoes what actual happened 
As words stream out loudly 
And unbeknownst of ears listening 
She beams her words proudly  
Still, I hold my head up high 
As she is running now for cover 
The antidote she never found 
To hide her brand new lover 
And so she’s vanished, she’s left the state 
And smiles are really beaming 
Lover’s Lane on Saturday night 
With two hearts now a dreaming
© Will Karry  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: exerting, betrayal,
Form: Free verse
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