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Peculiar Passage

The walls open their eyes as
the mantids begin to weave
a loving celestial vibe, incensing
the onset of this boundless drive
Not questioning if one will retain
sentience, escaping for a time
confinement within her hive

machine-like serpentine's 
propel mega metallic craft
exerting complex, magically carved
oaken ores 
opening dimensional gateways
ascending straight-through
intensified vibrational planes 
utilising the great wave
unlocking these secret doors

Fantastic crystal-blue eyed 
gnomes with iridescent feather 
shaped cheekbones perform 
a dance, whilst oscillating 
their elongated gold spoons

Traces of a nameless ancient face on
innumerable orange-pinkish moons
within vast space, divinely harmonised
eternally ringing out in high tune
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Levasseur Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Jaw dropping writing. Just killer use of our beautiful language, challenging the reader to keep up to absorb and to comprehend your meaning.
Desk Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 7:29 AM
I greatly appreciate your comment, Rob, thank you very much, happy new year.
Islam Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Beautifully written, Carl. Stay safe!
Desk Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Thank you very much Imran Islam for your comment and read.
Rose  Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Ah, your style is unique , and its riveting . Thankyou for sharing.
Desk Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Your very welcome Mystic Rose Rose, many thanks for your comment
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Hello Carl Bellerose, many mansions are all different on the inside. That would make them unique. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 4:38 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.You are my new friendy your evening .
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 12:52 PM
YHello Carl Bellerose, you are so welcomed You created a great poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
Desk Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 2:29 AM
Thank you for all your encouraging comments, Darlene De Beaulieu, greatly appreciated.
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