Peculiar Passage

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The walls open their eyes just as
the mantises begin to weave
a loving celestial vibe, incensing
the onset of this boundless drive
Not questioning if one will retain
sentience, escaping for a time
confinement within her hive

machine-like serpentine's 
propel mega metallic craft
exerting complex, magically carved
oaken ores 
opening dimensional gateways
ascending straight-through
intensified vibrational planes 
utilising the great wave
unlocking these secret doors

Fantastic crystal-blue eyed 
gnomes with iridescent feather 
shaped cheekbones perform 
a dance, whilst oscillating 
their elongated gold spoons

Traces of a nameless ancient face on
innumerable orange-pinkish moons
within vast space, divinely harmonised
eternally ringing out in high tune

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/25/2020 2:33:00 PM
Jaw dropping writing. Just killer use of our beautiful language, challenging the reader to keep up to absorb and to comprehend your meaning.
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Tidy Desk
Date: 1/1/2021 7:29:00 AM
I greatly appreciate your comment, Rob, thank you very much, happy new year.
Date: 7/11/2020 3:33:00 AM
Beautifully written, Carl. Stay safe!
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Tidy Desk
Date: 8/3/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Imran Islam for your comment and read.
Date: 6/22/2020 4:49:00 PM
Ah, your style is unique , and its riveting . Thankyou for sharing.
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Tidy Desk
Date: 6/23/2020 2:19:00 AM
Your very welcome Mystic Rose Rose, many thanks for your comment
Date: 5/18/2020 4:59:00 PM
Hello Carl Bellerose, many mansions are all different on the inside. That would make them unique. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2020 4:38:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.You are my new friendy your evening .
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2020 12:52:00 PM
YHello Carl Bellerose, you are so welcomed You created a great poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Tidy Desk
Date: 5/19/2020 2:29:00 AM
Thank you for all your encouraging comments, Darlene De Beaulieu, greatly appreciated.
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