Best Discomfiture Poems


Premium Member Suits and Ties

One of my boyhood dreams was to become a successful functionary,
With an office with a view, a fine oak desk and a pretty secretary!
To wear a suit and tie (to me) would be the pinnacle of success.
I was sick of wearin' brogans and overalls - I'd settle for nothin' less!

I suppose to a certain degree my youthful dreams came true.
For thirty years I wore a tie with the Air Force suit of blue.
Anon, the wearin' of a suit and tie had lost much of its appeal.
My discomfiture at wearin' a stranglin' tie became hard to conceal!

My spouse attributes my disdain for suits and ties as a lack of cultivation.
To not wear a suit and tie to church she considers an abomination!
I'll deign to wear such garb for a weddin' or funeral to be a tad more couth,
But I suffer thro' each excruciatin' minute of the ordeal to tell the truth!

Here in the wild west, a well-dressed dude wears scruffy boots and jeans.
Shucks, the feller could be a prosperous rancher and a man of means!
I'm in heavenly bliss wearin' my jeans sans a constrictin' suit and tie.
I feel as free as a golden eagle soarin' in the pristine Colorado sky!

I reckon that when I cease to function and bid my friends adieu,
That they'll insist on displayin' my mortal shell for everyone to view.
But if they dress me out in a daggone suit and especially a throttlin' tie,
There ain't no delicate way to express it - I'll just up and die!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved
Categories: discomfiture, funny,
Form: Rhyme

Depressions

Waking up with the demon digging your bowels
Imagining other marvels, your mind on a different level
Hit the streets with a system in discomfiture
Nose in the air as to flatter any future

People look around without seeing, eaten into by sins, remorse or even longing for a better being.
People got sores they can't heal, come across each other and can't feel.

I walk, ma mind away, and feel nothing
Nor the fresh air that I breathe, nor the fresh breezes from the beach,
I am digging a gap between my life and I, not even hearing the honking.

For I am dating with a siren
She’s sucking blood, killing my soul and drying my heart up
She extends my agony in silence


Depression is getting our life sucked up
Survival trauma,
Hatred, cost of living, pressure, consistency of need, incertitude, ignorance in all its bliss
Our life, a daily drama.......
Categories: discomfiture, angst,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Anxiety

The many faces scattered here-
the sense of misery had 
swollen, not unexpectedly.  Sound
“louder,” suddenly
at the end, dreadful movements
then till the end.
The clear red-hot,  mass of fire
blue, full of discomfiture-
forgotten for the almost
 unrecognizable  fear.

Pieces, trembling limbs,
burning eyes, feeling faint,
fumbled and slurred.
The thumping began again,
  set-off, hoping to be able
to discover the secret at last.

Too miserable, and  in a way
astonished.

The air, the day.
Categories: discomfiture, anxiety, music,
Form: Free verse

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The Pretty Boy Paradox

Vexation seeps through sighs 
As the pen finds comfort 
Sharing the same story

Nonsensical pretty boys 
With smoke cloud habits 
And bloodshot ponderings

Vaunting on their 
Newsworthy delinquency 
With incessant metal bar consequences 

Promulgating in the same breath 
they’re gaining 
New ground 

Breaking the cleanse 
Of poisoning 
Their liver 

And feeling the linear 
Coldness of a countertop 
On their nose

With a half glass of water 
In a ring of loneliness 
On their nightstand 

The gulp of insomnia 
Rudely digs its hook of candidness 
In your empathic being 

Melodramatic memories 
Of empty dinner table 
Upbringings 

Spending school nights 
Placing cigarettes 
In plastic bottles 

With front porch 
Heart to hearts 
With their second self 

Pulling the sleeves 
Of sweatshirts once borrowed 
Over tattooed knuckles 

Shivering against the disbelief 
That loyalty in this town
Is only face to face 

Rehashing 
first heartbreaks 
With the outlook 

That mistrust follows
Demons 
That look just like you 

The way you 
Introduce yourself 
With skintight beliefs 

Low cut distractions
Met with 
Amorous disposition 

Abrade their thoughts 
Of you from tantalizing 
To discomfiture 

And their ears 
Can’t handle 
Opprobrium especially from their friends 

When you would 
Put fingers 
In yours like an obstinate child 

Just to keep
Looking at them 
With oblivious blissful daydreams 

Even if you were 
Stumbling drunk 
Out of their broken front door the night before 

After learning 
They sent flowers to someone else 
Like a man with his paramour 

Leaving your existence 
In a blighted state 
Surrounded by empty walls 

For
They
Took it all 

But don’t worry 
The guilt of breaking your heart 
Is easier for them to swallow 

Than the nausea 
Traveling up their throat 
With the spew of your adoration
© Ali Lynn  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: discomfiture, break up, emo, growth,
Form: Free verse

Stung By Love

It was no longer a vague errand, 
She was determined to accost him 
She had overcome at last the dread 
Of having to face her painful dilemma 
With a vigorous jerk of her head 
She shook off many a great doubt. 

Never before had she undertaken 
A task more intense or more onerous 
But rather than await his conversion 
(Which could take an eternity 
In view of his embellished ego) 
She plunged headlong to the challenge 

She thought she had reconciled all things 
Moral, intellectual and even romantic 
And could now concentrate on the absorbing desire 
Nay! On her instinctive consummate goal 
Of finally casting off the deferential silence 
And facing off with this idiot of a lover 

Why would he not come out of the woods 
Take her hand and tell her he loved her so? 
She had coaxed her mind to cogitate an answer 
And caused her brain to ex-cogitate a solution 
This she had done with the dullest comprehension 
For it was eminently unworthy of her classic grace. 

But now at last it was done 
Her errand was now a solemn mission 
Out with the blundering alacrity! 
Out with all the mysterious reticence! 
She had come to take away her prize 
His implacable stance notwithstanding! 

But as she approached her destination 
And rose to advance to the exit 
She espied a figure, nay- the idiot lover 
Seated many rows in front of her 
He, too, was about to rise to alert the driver 

Stung, she slumped back on her seat 
And buried her head in her hands 
Till the object of her love and dreams 
Disembarked ... and hurried down the footpath 
With shame and pangs of discomfiture 
She waved the driver on... to some other place.
Categories: discomfiture, first love,
Form: Free verse

Wind the Musical Element of Life

Wind is that wonderful element replenished at each breath,
Interrupting this rhythm even for a moment results in a discomfiture.
Wild wind rustling through the leaves of the tree,
Carrying with it the fresh fragrances of life, 
That make me feel alive and free.

Wind makes it's powerful presence felt at all latitude,
And you dare not miss it at a high altitude.
Wind in a mean, mad mood can be monstrous,
And cause damage at a massive magnitude.
 
Wind is the medium in which sound moves,
It is the cause for the tall trees to sway, 
And the science behind causing the spray, 
When it kisses the ocean's surface in a passionate play. 

Wind the wandering minstrel
continually plays the magic 
of that mystical, musical note called life
Categories: discomfiture, life,
Form: Rhyme


Why Is Life That Way

© Ben Burton 6/18/2016

It's difficult to feel good
When you see
A long lost loved one
The meeting predicated
On the death of another
You both loved
But, at least one of you
Barely saw at all
Once those early years were gone
So you hug
And you grieve
And you talk
With an air of discomfiture
Merely making conversation
While wondering how it happened
For excuses are just that
If you seize the time and own it
With the will to make it happen
One more good, back home reunion
But... the kids had things to do
Then, their kids had more to do
Though there is no right or wrong
In decisions of the heart
Always intended to
Somehow life got in the way
And the time had moved along
Was life bursting? Bustling
With imperatives
Far more important
Than spending time
Some of that precious, little time
With those who knew you well
Back then
Inside your photo album
Is the proof of all that once was
Those memories still linger
Fondly, sometimes, tearfully
Of your dear relatives
Those who share your blood
But as you've gotten older
It's like you barely know
The one behind the face
Who was a centerpiece
In your long-ago life
For whom you still feel love
But it's hard to love a stranger
As deeply as your family
Yet...that is who they are
Your béloved family
Whom you see occasionally
In that photo album
But infrequently face-to-face
Until another death
In your dying family
But you swear to stay in touch
And you mean it
And they mean it
Then, time melts even more
And yet another dies
The funeral reunites
Repetition draped in heartache
For what you could have done
But did not do
But, hey!
Neither did they
So you shake your head and say
"Why is life that way?"
Yet and still
You've got tomorrow
But so little time to waste
For soon comes that reunion
Where the late, béloved centerpiece
Is you
© Ben Burton  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: discomfiture, death, feelings, remember,
Form: Free verse

The Last 4 Years and the Coming Decade 3

Conceited clericalism is encroaching scientific study and educational exploration, obdurate obscurantism engulfing people's normal mentality and judgment, ramrod racism routing ethnic equality and melting harmony~~~~~~
After 4 years of punk-sunk domestic complexion and skunk-drunk diplomatic stance under that frustrating and even facetious leadership, nothing meritorious had been left except for an unprecedentedly nationwide antagonistic atmosphere, an utterly disaffected alliance climate, a half-botched eyesore slouchy at the southern border flaunting its segregating strength on a derisorily slipshod base and a Covid death toll higher than that caused by world war 2.               
Whatever disorder, discomfiture, disgrace and disruption he had brought, it was up to none other than the belated ballot to bring him down for want of any other alternatives effectual enough to invoke. It had certainly been shameful enough to etch the annals to have that pus-grubber holding a full 4-year term who had been out-and-out treasonable, unscrupulous, narcissistic and almost every moment fixated on a peculiar sense of holding court rather than holding duty. But even as he was about to step down perforce, the mind-boggling moxie of his moribund melodrama was still stepping up. Seeing an election result rolling out against him, he started to roar, roll and rattle all around together with his minions, inundating quite some states' litigation offices with dozens of sloppy suits only to be drained up by one identical whitewash from go to whoa in their totally failed attempts to turn the table. After the electoral college's confirmation in Dec.14, his nearest followers gradually got to rest disheartened, that doom-diver still remained restless in his mug's game, without the least care or concern over state affaires, day and night phoning and wiring to different executive departments, law enforcements and gubernatorial offices his pissing and moaning about so-called his opponent's cheating evidences and his stolen scores as if nothing but an immediate reversal of the result could meet the real justice. As the whole world stopped to watch how the dead cat bounce during his remnant continuance, a big deal did be bounced out.
Categories: discomfiture, america, international, introspection, political,
Form: Prose

The Podium of Casanova's Odium

Tell me, Casanova, how long you’ll pine
On sodden sleeves your heart you’ve worn
Reputation on the line in decline
Sterile standing in society shorn

Of its aura of charm and calm
Reduced to tatters
With no love balm
In sight, your maneuver no longer flatters

As you once boasted it could
At your beck and call
Methinks you’re knocking on wood
Hastening your free fall 

From grace as your pedestal
Driven to its knees
Slumps horizontal
With pitiful pleas

For release from the grip
The siren on you
Seems to rip
Anew

Threads of last ditch 
Hope on which bits and slits of your heart hang
Primed to switch
Off the clang

In the intensive care unit
In which between Charybdis and Scylla
Where the last throes of your discomfiture knit
In the power Priscilla

Yields to snuff out
In rapid fire
The doubt
On hire that can longer respire

Gives up its ghost
In shame and odium
To a tortuous toast
On your Waterloo podium

Where spectators fed up with your pitiful pleas
Demand the coup de grace
Sleaze 
To terminate your winless race to save your face.
Categories: discomfiture, poems,
Form: Free verse

Mink's Manifesto 2

How can human deal with all the other animals with a sense of indisputable superiority? What makes them keep mollycoddling the mean motive of extracting from other animals as much as possible while paying little love or care?
In their eyes, our husbandry only meets their needs for fur, yet our holocaust serves perfectly to decelerate the covid's spread. What a horrible horde of "hypochondriac" hotspurs! Hence nothing but the humanistic & humanitarian outrage's  outstretch has sped! 
Mauling in flagrant air, they're unscrupulous in self-warranted villainies as the ruling species. Moaning in despair, we're in no position to defend ourselves as cheaply disposable herds. Sweeping and speeding, they have a crash compensation for covid curse coming their way by commencing a cruel culling campaign over pro-peace populations. Weeping and bleeding, we're creating poignant literatures which will snivel sanguinary historicity for later generations.

Does their ferocity really mitigate their discomfiture? Let's take a glimpse at the present picture------which can't be more self-evident------ As a series of crackdowns of necessity get under way: 
Large-scale lockdown, shutdown, quotidian curfew, social contact constrictions, manifold travel and transport bans continually and constantly upset human's regular hours and cadences, all walks of life lapsing into doldrums or even standstills and every sector wading strenuously in the swamp of slump, covid sets out an exclusive trip at great ease, staging a worldwide itinerant show in extravagant style, pestering human being all around the globe, tossing them into a vicious circle of "everywhere they've fled, nowhere for them to flee", taunting their knock-off caliber in comparison to a veritable calamity of public hygiene and smashing their transgressive turgidity and turpitude inexorably and mercilessly. But ironically, the more toughly the real corona of covid gets human pinched, the more tightly human gets their imaginary corona clinched, of which the title presumes to be the universe's sole supreme, in which the content, however, contributes to sciosophist's sloppy ream.
Categories: discomfiture, animal, anti bullying, cry,
Form: Burlesque

Premium Member Lost In Consciousness

I skitter cross time's restless bones in search of sleep's access,
Discomfiture not fate or man but "restless legs" (1) confess.
An accidental drug (2) does treat if I do not forget,
It calms legs down that trouble sleep, of course,  desired and yet,
It can't put out the flame that fries one's goal of no duress.

A curious thing sleep is, 'REM' when we dream we're awake,
And not shut down, though sensory, the input all is fake,
Perhaps derived from memories that trouble us it seems,
The repetition seems to help to quiet down our dreams,
We wake to loss, real pain, and joy, expecting the earthquake

Of death may someday end it all. Trust me! Does peace appall?
The older grow to see old age as just another fall,
And winter too suggests to some that spring will come and soon,
One door may close, but what's unseen? Feel free to curse the moon,
But nothing will forestall, I'd guess, the end of large and small!


Brian Johnston
10th of September 2018

Poet's Notes:
(1) Restless leg syndrome is a recently named condition that causes feelings of discomfort in one's legs that make you move your legs in an attempt to get more comfortable. It is like how you might feel if ants were crawling on your legs.
(2) A drug that got developed for other reasons was accidentally discovered to give relief to people suffering from this problem.
Categories: discomfiture, death, life,
Form: Rhyme

Cupid Clinkers and Blinkers

Love in its majesty and spendour
Visits hearts kind and unkind
Waxing her odour and ardour
To help the love-lost to find

Little spaces, loving faces
Enamoured enough
To rise from surfaces
Where disappointment tough and rough

Lampoons discomfiture
Inflicted in the name
Of a culture whose stricture
Makes the lost lame

With heartbreaks
Torrents of tears
Ruing mistakes
Made as fears

Sprang on the lost the illusion
Baked in their soft centre
In reaction to the disaffection and delusion
That feelings may never enter

Into contests
Where the ruthless inflict maximum pain
Under pretexts
A go at love in the main

Signifies a journey on the back of futility
Backed up by contrary advice
Veering towards the volatility
Love tags along in every slice

Love snaps on suitors 
Mad
Enough to pose as imitators
Of sad

Hearts that cried
Once smitten
To the core when they tried
To tame love forgotten

Into the dustbin of history
Replete with burnt fingers
Whose mixed blessing story
Singe many Cupid singers.
Categories: discomfiture, poems,
Form: Free verse

Clarion Call Sounded On My Wailing Wall

Narrow escapes- thrice threatening
Came and went
Despite succor abstaining
My soul under no circumstances meant

Harm to my person
Stolid as I sometimes dreamt to claim
Not heeding, not learning warnings a salutary lesson
That on me poured blame

Sucked from narrow escapes
Felt deep within my clones, bones, tones and zones 
As fortune on my side with sour grapes
From goring horns and thorns

Gunning and turning in earnestness
Towards the weaker flank
Carelessness on my part gifted wanton wistfulness
Grown from dating devices I couldn’t spank

As on my knees I slumped
Begging feet of defeat to spare me
When false charges I slapped
On the sooth-sayer I could hardly see or foresee

In the vicinity of the battlefield
Where blood gushed
From a weal shield
That blows from all directions hushed

Weak on melting knees I slumped
The writing on the wailing wall
Dawned near and clear as bludgeon blows together clamped and lumped
I was undone! Slow and certain sounded the clarion call

Fate and its mates
Discomfiture and discomfort couldn’t obviate
From doom and gloom gates
Fortune could no longer deviate

From gurgling and giggling gates of Hell
Open so wide
To spell and tell
The demise my pride

Touted on the snout of the clout pout and spout
Tinted by the ubris crease whose fleece
Made up of diseased doubt
That no retreat could delete from a missed kiss

Swollen and stolen
In a last step ditch effort
All of a sudden- sullen
As crude collapse conquered my fort.
Categories: discomfiture, poems,
Form: Free verse
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