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Stung By Love

It was no longer a vague errand, She was determined to accost him She had overcome at last the dread Of having to face her painful dilemma With a vigorous jerk of her head She shook off many a great doubt. Never before had she undertaken A task more intense or more onerous But rather than await his conversion (Which could take an eternity In view of his embellished ego) She plunged headlong to the challenge She thought she had reconciled all things Moral, intellectual and even romantic And could now concentrate on the absorbing desire Nay! On her instinctive consummate goal Of finally casting off the deferential silence And facing off with this idiot of a lover Why would he not come out of the woods Take her hand and tell her he loved her so? She had coaxed her mind to cogitate an answer And caused her brain to ex-cogitate a solution This she had done with the dullest comprehension For it was eminently unworthy of her classic grace. But now at last it was done Her errand was now a solemn mission Out with the blundering alacrity! Out with all the mysterious reticence! She had come to take away her prize His implacable stance notwithstanding! But as she approached her destination And rose to advance to the exit She espied a figure, nay- the idiot lover Seated many rows in front of her He, too, was about to rise to alert the driver Stung, she slumped back on her seat And buried her head in her hands Till the object of her love and dreams Disembarked ... and hurried down the footpath With shame and pangs of discomfiture She waved the driver on... to some other place.

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Date: 12/29/2017 8:06:00 AM
You started your time here at the soup with a masterpiece. A truly textured and exceptional piece. Happy New Year to you as well.
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Date: 7/28/2013 4:55:00 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 8/9/2014 9:56:00 AM
Sean, Shadow, PDA- how did I miss these gems of encouragement? Thank you all.
Date: 7/28/2013 4:48:00 AM
Gerald congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:42:00 PM
Hello Gerald,, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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Date: 7/12/2013 11:21:00 PM
sweet! sweet Gerald -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 7/13/2013 4:23:00 AM
Thanks, Linda- (the neat one in Portuguese?). You've written so much. Congratulations. I'll bookmark your page. And, yes, i'll post some more.
Date: 7/12/2013 4:51:00 PM
Gerald, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, can't wait to read more... Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 7/13/2013 4:55:00 AM
Thanks Skat-OZ. Read 'Sunburn' and loved it. It speaks to anyone who's been at the beach in Summer...whatever 'cos here in Kenya summer is with us most of the time. Will read more.
Date: 7/12/2013 6:52:00 AM
- Hi Gerald, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 7/12/2013 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. I'm reading yours and I find them so communicative and serene. Will visit as often as I can. I've posted some more.

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