I wrote a series of these all from the same piece of text.Quite an interesting exercise.
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The many faces scattered here- the sense of misery had swollen, not unexpectedly. Sound “louder,” suddenly at the end, dreadful movements then till the end. The clear red-hot, mass of fire blue, full of discomfiture- forgotten for the almost unrecognizable fear. Pieces, trembling limbs, burning eyes, feeling faint, fumbled and slurred. The thumping began again, set-off, hoping to be able to discover the secret at last. Too miserable, and in a way astonished. The air, the day.
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