Barbs Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Domestic Battlefield

 
sad children spyin'
     a storm of conflict brewin' ~
mom and dad trade barbs

Premium Member Here now this morn

with bliss at forefront 
we take no affront
at barbs, jibes and taunts
of ego that flaunts

light in each node etched
our hand is outstretched 
impulsed by heart thawed
as servant of God

betwixt bliss beat’s chime
we lose sense of time 
dwelling in the pause
in sync with God’s laws

Premium Member REPRESSIVE TOLERANCE

There is a thorn - a nightmare thorn -
that cannot be pulled from the skin.
It is covered with tiny barbs
that allow it only to be pushed deeper in.

It burrows when it is touched.
It seeks the fleshy core.
It is never happy with a surface wound.
It always wants more, more, more!

It never attacks alone, as well.
It bristles and waits for the unwary.
It is a jumping cholla spine;
and yet it is far less scary,
because it doesn’t pretend nor hide
and then stab the world from the left-hand side.


Premium Member Silencing Growls Of War

See how frozen rice brings gaiety
from the weight of a half-starved life ,
palms etching the barbs of terrorism;

Already the villainous hours smell of puss,
ripe lesions , and unbearable heat :
dried bones snapping from gun-barrels
of greedy, power- laden pillagers --
the hissing growl of  wars 
rake bloody sky from its quiet days .

So chidren , listen well...build
A new earth blessed with peaceful hearth
and fresh broth,
clutch all  neighborly moments endeared,
whispering prayers for safe glide
soothing night's guardianship  ... and as
You lay on pure  lights from angels' wings,
live each hour with grace of integrity
to hold not a chaos brimming with envy; 
as Spirit renews a world lulled by love,

Premium Member A fly on the wall

fly flitting on wall
listens to loose tongues babble
spinning prayer wheels
flinging barbs at absent foes
behind walls, out of earshot.

Soon the fly grows bored
of vain drivel chasing tales
sense left long ago—
so it slips out open pane
to sense truth in rubbish bins

Premium Member The Jagged Edges

The barbs she threw at him
left jagged edges on them both
torn from deep within herself
        raw, bloody pieces of meat 
      hurled violently across the room,
          the space, the endless time.
They cleaved to him, each one
      slowly shrouding the man
until he became a prickly porcupine.
Some silent days, from weariness
      would bring respite, closeness.
          In intimacy, his spines
      would prick her open wounds;
They could not help themselves,
        They no longer had control.
And so they lived, or slowly died
      behind soft lace curtains;
        a bitter purgatory
          on the jagged edges
      of a new society.


Premium Member The Jagged Edges

Natural things are rarely smooth
or flawless as they appear on the surface
      Smooth fur on skin and curve on wing
           are rough and jagged underneath
Push back against the grain shows true texture within
       reveals bristling hairs and quill barbs of feathers
          It's the grit within that shapes us
A pearl is smooth but inside is a seed of grit
We need the bumps knurls and gnarls to grip and hold
Slick things slip through silky wet and wanton fingers
          Most natural things are rough at birth
Stones and gold nuggets are fractured rough at source
They're smoothed by wear and tear of sand rubbing in streams
        Babies are smooth at birth but age roughens them
Humans grind away all day at nature's roughness
seeking perfection in shiny smooth and faultless
      Blissfully they're unaware that
it's the faults flaws texture and roughness within
           that glistens shiny the pearl
It's the bumps and gnarls outside that knurls the grip

Premium Member Desert Love

I met you in a season,
as I recall, it was cool;
we dated through the warmth,
not the hottest of the 4 -- 
Falls I can’t recall...cactus
have no leaves; and summer-heat 
bakes away all thought -- 

Yet, deserts, though little water,
have an abundance of romance:
wet kisses between the barbs.  I met
you in a season, 2 stray saguaros
locking arms.

anonymous warrior

the faceless strikes keyboard hard
shooting opinion barbs 
inside the church he prays to 

this anonymous stalker hunts  
his unseen victim-cries  
he-the faceless remains faceless  

# for Bite Size Contest No118 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

lone is the boy

the peasants shed their tears alone,
while the kings and queens
sit upon their judging thrones .

come down and take the child by the hand 
show him the way.
for time has come where the light
upon his path,
        is starting to turn dark.

put away your minds prejudices.  

the prejudices that hides behind 
      the illusions
and the contempt that hides 
      inside the delusions.

in the core of the hollows heart
 is where insecurities,
             feast.

sometimes silence cuts deeper 
     than a stabbing knife.

shooting stinging barbs. 
cutting through to
        the bone.

a soul destroyed cry
 breaks the nights silence.

     listen to its laments.

the wounded beast is easy prey
to the contemptuous  
 who sit on
 thrones of high.

these throne occupiers don't awaken to the pain
from their downpouring 
                                  rain

Premium Member Trident of Living

Yesterday is wrapped loosely
in the barbs and silky vapor of memory.
Tomorrow is a Mahogany wall of steep hope 
slippery anxiety.
The Present is an awkward roll on an ocean.
of crimson crests and sable troughs.
Perfumed sails and bow-crushing sirens
Flashes of flippers and fins.
Sudden slashes and clicks.
The tapestry of grand sudden sorrow.

Premium Member The Mockery Garden

The girl, new, fresh;
         wandered innocently 
   through the mockery;
             the type the English 
      are so fond of building.
Fronds of false friendship 
brushed against her virgin skin
        leaving seeds of doubt 
  within her delicate folds,
        to be harvested;
                in time.
She was tempted
       by the alluring,
            plump, red fruit;
  whose juices now mingled
           with her blood
       upon the thousand
                tiny cuts
     their barbs had made.
And as she walked
            the brambles
      rustling whispers
                       of deceit 
 followed in her shadow.
She quickly turned around
            to find
         a glorious array
               of Gladioli
      their bright colors 
    embroidered by the sun;
                   in the breeze
bobbing their approval.

Premium Member my friendless Cousin Betty

thinks she is witty
sarcasm her daily fare
a nonfriend maker

cannot help her barbs
alienates all she meets
my cousin betty

What’s It All About Alfie?

Arrows, what are they good for?
In an embodied dungeon very near to
my molested liver
arrows pile up, bundles of barbs,
each one a love letter
that missed its mark.
Some older ones
still drip an attenuated poison 
from their blunted tips.
Yes, love can be cruel
but it is rarely accurate.
It lives only to maim you
until you know how to live
with yet deeper wounds,
those piercing near misses
lodged between heart
and hope.

Premium Member Tailored Barbs

They say words shouldn’t hurt,
but mine are crafted,
a perfect match for the tender places
you believe no one notices.

I don’t need to throw punches;
the right words can strike
with more force than a blow.
The best part?
I can smile afterward,
clean hands, no marks,
just your pride,
folded like a flimsy chair
at a backyard wedding.

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