The Jagged Edges

The barbs she threw at him
left jagged edges on them both
torn from deep within herself
        raw, bloody pieces of meat 
      hurled violently across the room,
          the space, the endless time.
They cleaved to him, each one
      slowly shrouding the man
until he became a prickly porcupine.
Some silent days, from weariness
      would bring respite, closeness.
          In intimacy, his spines
      would prick her open wounds;
They could not help themselves,
        They no longer had control.
And so they lived, or slowly died
      behind soft lace curtains;
        a bitter purgatory
          on the jagged edges
      of a new society.
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Chiri Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Congrats on your win!:)
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:47 AM
Thank you Brenda
La France Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:30 PM
Terry, congratulations on your win in my J With Four Options contest. Your poem is well done and I like it, Constance
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:48 AM
Thank you Constance and for running this very interesting contest it garnered some fantastic work
Goldsmith Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. What a story. I enjoyed reading your sad and powerful write again. Have a blessed day with your win................
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:48 AM
Thank you again Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 2:24 PM
What a sad write but I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a blessed day writing away.........
Miller Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 12:42 AM
Thank you Paula
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