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Perfect Illusion

within the oscillation of melting clocks, our poltergeists of times long expired…still reverberate~ tainted ticking echoing in an everlasting tug of war, pushing and pulling, throwing barbs at bleeding hearts oh, how the echoes distort reality, haunting perfect illusions~ remnants of misunderstood souls caught in constant conflict… what was once a beacon of love~ transmuted inhospitable confusion words, warped by borderline delusions, each syllable twisted and contorted, blind rationality, unraveling the ties that bind, wrapping them around suffocating throats, choking on harsh accusations~ until we became irrelevant irretrievable phantoms~ perpetually confined within stupefied misapprehension…..

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Date: 12/4/2024 9:50:00 PM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Sara Jama
Date: 12/5/2024 8:58:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/27/2024 7:39:00 PM
like the darker undertones - beauty two line third stanza creates an interesting shift in meter, creatively woven
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Sara Jama
Date: 11/28/2024 5:42:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/27/2024 4:04:00 PM
This is intense, but in a good way! Love the haunting imagery, it really pulls you into the chaos. Bravo!
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Sara Jama
Date: 11/28/2024 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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