Acclimatising Poems | Examples


Premium Member Dreaming

DREAMING
 the edge
of dream
&ecstasy
so
genteel
 finally settled

 an exquisite
& intimate
 subtle nuance
of bright
  minimal
 space
so small
& unimposing
 acclimatising
 the setting
so
 ethereal
& exotic
 in a void

 passing beauty
an
 ephemerality
 of happiness
 the
mystery
of being
develops

composed
 sudden shafts
sun
then
 moonlight
in
rhapsodic
pictures
  pass at speed
sense of being
free &
 out of place


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

Sunset At Home

Sitting in a dim but golden room
Looking out into the cooling gloom of evening
Checking out the mundane.....
Is the washing dry?

Silly question I remind myself!
After the heat of the day, 37 degrees
The only thing dripping is me
Acclimatising at last in Malta!

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