Dreaming
DREAMING
the edge
of dream
&ecstasy
so
genteel
finally settled
an exquisite
& intimate
subtle nuance
of bright
minimal
space
so small
& unimposing
acclimatising
the setting
so
ethereal
& exotic
in a void
passing beauty
an
ephemerality
of happiness
the
mystery
of being
develops
composed
sudden shafts
sun
then
moonlight
in
rhapsodic
pictures
pass at speed
sense of being
free &
out of place
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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