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Dreaming

DREAMING  the edge of dream &ecstasy so genteel  finally settled  an exquisite & intimate  subtle nuance of bright   minimal  space so small & unimposing  acclimatising  the setting so  ethereal & exotic  in a void  passing beauty an  ephemerality  of happiness  the mystery of being develops composed  sudden shafts sun then  moonlight in rhapsodic pictures   pass at speed sense of being free &  out of place NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 11/1/2022 6:51:00 PM
What a nice dream poem.
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