Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Zoom Santa

After last year~after all the millions of miles,                                                             Santa put his sled in for a check-up with smiles.                                                           Last year the sled was very slow,                                                                                  it needed a lot more go~go.                                                                      He wants to make sure all the girls~boys,                                                                   will get all of their many toys.                                                                    His mechanic said~take it for a ride,                                                                               Santa came back and cried.                                                                      His sled now has plenty of Zoom,                                                                                   out the back came a huge fiery plume.                                                  Santa had a jolly big laugh,                                                                                           a million thanks to all of your staff. 

 

Date Written: 12/5/2021 

2 Place

# 10.   zoom 
''Z'' Contest, New or Old - Poetry Contest                                                           Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Marikate Kingston December 22, 2021 at 6:23 PM I had "a big jolly laugh" reading your poem. Good old Santa. Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2021 at 8:40 AM Thanks for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you had a fun laugh with this Zoom Santa write. I love to make people laugh/smile. An even funnier one is my "Santa Reindeer" one. Check it our for a bigger laugh. Have a Blessed Christmas..................

Constance La France December 11, 2021 at 2:43 PM Paula, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Z" Contest, delightful write ~ love and serenity _ Constance Paula Goldsmith December 12, 2021 at 12:13 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win in your "Z" Contest. Glad you like my cute Zoom Santa write. I enjoyed writing it for your contest. Have a blessed day..................

Sam Kauffman December 9, 2021 at 11:19 AM Just delightful Paula! Better not stand too close to the back of the sleigh! Here's to a new "Zoom" for the holidays! Congrats and high fives for your win! Blessings to you and Santa! Paula Goldsmith December 10, 2021 at 7:51 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like this fun Zoom Santa write. Time for hot dogs and marshmallows. Have a blessed day..................

Ann Peck December 7, 2021 at 9:16 AM What a sweet, fun poem, Paula :) I think Santa may need zoom pills pretty soon ~ he's getting pretty old :) Congratulations on your win! Paula Goldsmith December 7, 2021 at 9:49 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Yes, he may need extra zoom for himself real soon. Glad you like this sweet Santa write. Have a blessed day..................

Judy Ball December 7, 2021 at 12:02 AM Too cute Paula. Maybe that zooming ride all around the world is what gives him the HOHOHO. Good luck in the contest my friend. JB Paula Goldsmith December 7, 2021 at 9:47 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Yes, he needs that extra zoom. Glad you like my cute Santa write. Have a blessed day..................

Mystic Rose Rose December 6, 2021 at 3:14 PM I am sure Santa has a private mechanic that knows just what to do, lol, nicely penned , it was fun to read, stay jovial my friend :) Paula Goldsmith December 7, 2021 at 9:46 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun Santa write. Yes, a private mechanic helps him out. Have a blessed day...................

Bill Baker December 6, 2021 at 11:42 AM Fun rhyme poem Paula, well written and fun to read. Got a smile from me. Bill Paula Goldsmith December 7, 2021 at 9:44 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you got a smile from my write. I love to give out smiles. Have a blessed day...................

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 6, 2021 at 11:01 AM Glad those sleigh bells will be ringing on time this year. A delightful contest entry, Paula. Good luck. Blessings, Evelyn Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 11:27 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Yes, the sleigh bells will be ringing on time. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day/week..................

Joanna Daniel December 6, 2021 at 6:16 AM Fun write, Paula, enjoyed:) Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 8:35 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Santa story. Have a blessed day/week.......................

Delice Arleen Skelly December 6, 2021 at 2:46 AM Very festive full of seasonal fun...Well done Paula...Delice Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 8:34 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun story. Have a blessed day/week.......................