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We were very excited since the day is nice for a trip to the zoo and play. The petting Zoo was the first place we saw and got to hold and touch the rabbit's paw. All the tame animals came through and we heard the lion's roar and cows' moo. The train monkeys, baboons, and chimpanzees banana junkies were in the few trees. The zoo trainer was stringent, but gentle, a loud voice, but never did go mental. A cold stare that could stun a wasp to mind and held a stick if they stepped out of line. Standing close beside us, was a giraffe stretching out its long pink tongue with a laugh. Popcorn it wanted that we were holding; so much fun the day was still unfolding. 5/12/2023 Writing Challenge - 'Z' Words Poetry Contest 2. Zoo Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 5/20/2023 5:57:00 AM
A trip to the zoo is always exciting especially with children. Great Couplets. Congratulations on your win, dear Eve
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Date: 5/16/2023 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/15/2023 4:30:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
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Date: 5/14/2023 2:33:00 PM
what a charming poem Eve, we chose the same theme word too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2023 1:25:00 PM
Eve, You have written a great rhymed Zoo poem, which reads so smoothly. Congratulations on your fine contest win. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/14/2023 7:32:00 AM
A sweet write Eve. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/14/2023 7:01:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on winning the contest with your excellent poetry.
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Date: 5/14/2023 2:02:00 AM
Stunning poem, Eve. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/13/2023 2:46:00 PM
what a happy, happy poem, Eve! I love that giraffe, especially! :) Best of luck!
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Date: 5/13/2023 8:26:00 AM
Uplifting voice to your poem my friend. Zoo vibes throughout feeling like we were there with you. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 5/12/2023 9:05:00 PM
We feel we too are there with you! Good luck in the contest, Eve ~ enjoyed the write immensely
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