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Zen mode

toroidal heart asserts its presence with a steady pulsating hum electrifying all nodes within form with silent magnetic thunder holy trinity embodied within our core

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/22/2023 7:44:00 PM

Oh yes, this is such a profound and deeply philosophical poem, that embodies the ultimate source of supreme power within one's own self..I love the wordplay here, so brilliant! "silent magnetic thunder holy trinity embodied within our core" Only if we are open to insightful wisdome and knowledge, we can find that light of resilience within our souls.. So beautifully crafted.. loved reading this!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/23/2023 3:20:00 AM

Yes the magnetic energisation of trinity, I understood it, a powerful write indeed about the Holy Spirit ~ :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/22/2023 8:20:00 PM

This poem has to do with the magnetic energisation of form by the kundalini, chi or Holy Spirit, as It is called in different cultures.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/22/2023 8:19:00 PM

You seem to be on a run with trophy wins, Hiya! All the best!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/22/2023 7:45:00 PM

Also, I just wanted to thank you for placing me so kindly in your contest. I truly appreciate it wholeheartedly, it's such an honour ~ very grateful! Sending light and best wishes :)