Zelda

I once knew a frightful witch named Zelda She resented bitterly her Dada There was no denying No use even trying All good looks went to Sis Esmeralda Unfortunately no brew charm or spell Could possibly make Zelda look swell ~ AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on October 28, 2018

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/31/2018 1:27:00 AM

Funny! Great! I love a limerick, especially a good one like this.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/29/2018 3:43:00 PM

Lol... very nice

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Pashang.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/28/2018 11:05:00 PM

Every time I think of a witch I think Hazel or Zelda, but Zelda first. Funny this poem, and Esmerelda always sounds like a witch too. I love it that Daddy got the blame for giving all the good looks to the sister.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2018 6:10:00 AM

LOL thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2018 8:17:00 PM

Hi Line, Lol! Now that is funny. Esmeralda probably has twin sis named Matilda. I really enjoyed this limerick:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 10:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.