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Zealous Shoreline

Serene surge of peace, A scene of tranquil waters; Engulfed by nature.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 10:19:00 AM
Surge of peace, engulfed by nature. I don't know what to say that I haven't already said. beautiful
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:02:00 AM
Sitting on the edge of water is a soothing feeling. Relaxing to the soul.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:42:00 PM
Zealous it is to sit next to the water. Love E.
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:59:00 PM
Serene surge, wow, a wonder worth experiencing. Tyler
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Date: 3/18/2009 6:22:00 AM
Peace-filled imagery Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings
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Date: 3/16/2009 6:47:00 PM
THAT WAS A VERY NICE POEM RAUL........................DANIELLE
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Date: 3/16/2009 3:09:00 PM
This is wonderful, I love the use of surge of peace, when you could almost expect there to be a surge of waters, really well done. Déirdre
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Date: 3/16/2009 2:15:00 PM
How wicked is this haiku.. the last line rocks Raul..loved it.
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Date: 3/16/2009 1:06:00 PM
This is such a beatiful Haiku, Raul! It would be lovely just to sit and reflect here for a while! Well done! Love, Robin
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