Zealous Shoreline

Serene surge of peace, 
A scene of tranquil waters; 
Engulfed by nature.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Surge of peace, engulfed by nature. I don't know what to say that I haven't already said. beautiful
Goombi Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:02 AM
Sitting on the edge of water is a soothing feeling. Relaxing to the soul.
Neal Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:42 PM
Zealous it is to sit next to the water. Love E.
Martin Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 10:59 PM
Serene surge, wow, a wonder worth experiencing. Tyler
Strand Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 6:22 AM
Peace-filled imagery Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings
Moreno Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 6:47 PM
THAT WAS A VERY NICE POEM RAUL........................DANIELLE
Omaidin Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 3:09 PM
This is wonderful, I love the use of surge of peace, when you could almost expect there to be a surge of waters, really well done. Déirdre
Higgins Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 2:15 PM
How wicked is this haiku.. the last line rocks Raul..loved it.
Gass Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 1:06 PM
This is such a beatiful Haiku, Raul! It would be lovely just to sit and reflect here for a while! Well done! Love, Robin
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