Zealot

Rogue and destitute, 
In dreamlessness I drift
Stolen by the numbness of routine
I lack your acceptance; I crave the pristine

Your pivoting words both lull and dull me
I harden day by day in its power
Though inside, the spark still lives
Gaining ground in an otherwise lost heart

Toil I must
Wait, I trust

Can you not grab hold of life and hurl these material things?
Can you not, for once, be free of control, and instead live?
Can you bear your force upon me with passion,
Instead of stone-faced apathy?

Direct me, and I will flee from all paths 
From all of your torturous machinations
You cannot protect me, destroyer of joy!
Worship your uninspired content,
Your uncurious, indifferent rot

For I must away, 
To the greatness of every day  
To undo this cursed sleep you have inflicted upon me
Awaken me, undress me, and bathe me in secret exhilarations
And do not look on me like one who regrets,
Do not qualm over this uncontrolled zealot who possesses me
For she dresses you, comforts you, enlivens you, completes you
Every great day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Runyan Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 5:38 PM
I'm so glad this was on the front page. I got to see what a great talent you are. Congratulations on getting there. I'm definitely adding you to my favorite poets. I love your style. 7 for sure
Runyan Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 7:01 PM
:)
Breidenthal Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read, Janet. I am honored, and you made my day! : ) <3~Laura
Hicks Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:19 PM
"Worship your uninspired content, Your uncurious, indifferent rot" Well if that's not a poetic slap to the face to wake up, I'm not sure what is. If someone said that to me, I'd feel like I was dreadfully boring ... ha ha. This certainly was dramatic, and a rebellion against routine ... we all crave a good surprise now and then, which is well expressed here. I think Justin used the perfect word though "confrontational" .... continue in your Zealot ways, my friend :)
Breidenthal Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Your comments make me beam zealously! Youre very perceptive Timothy and you understandbmy poetry so well! I was never one for routine. Thank you very kindly my sweet friend! :) ~Laura
Kilmer Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 9:13 PM
You need discipline. I have a hawk on my shoulder. Who would gladly pluck an eye out. Come with me and we can learn together.For I am weak too. ~KILMER~
Breidenthal Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 2:21 AM
I learn so much through you Stephen. You're an enigma and a thrill! No boring moment with you around I'm sure.. ~Laura
Kearley Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 12:17 AM
Very dramatic indeed... Wow! I kind of got lost on the "For I must away" though? Maybe you could explain.
Breidenthal Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 2:19 AM
I meant I must break away from the daily grind, the inevitable to complete my zealot thirsts. Hope I make sense. Love you Dan!! ~ Laura
Bordner Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Good love never settles for old fire Laura...your feelings of raging desire and need for undesigned days is so beautifully confrontational in this new poem. "Awaken me, undress me, bathe me in secret exhilarations, and do not look on me as one who regrets..." beautiful dignity this is, our hearts speak the same language Laura...J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:38 PM
I always treasure your affectionate comments, Justin. It's lovely to know you understand in the deep, special way that we all crave. ~Laura
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