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Revealing Youth Quirks' Secrets

“Children, obey your parents in the Lord: for this is right.” Thus declared Ephesians 6:1 of the Holy Scriptures… I confess that I’m guilty of juvenile stubbornness With my naughty quirks I can’t deny …Now somehow revealed by my kids. As to table manners, there was I feasting too long… Or I could be oblivious of Mother’s counsel for healthy breakfast I would share with and even give all my milk to the cat Then drowned my unfinished meal into the sink So as not to be late for the class. “Be honest!”* That was asserted with faith in our home. Yet, I would often barter my sandwich with my seatmate’s candies When Mom asked how the jam tasted, I said, “cheese, ok!” Sometimes, I would sell our store-cereals to have “own money” Then boast of a cash-prize when inquired of the source. With “Cleanliness is next to godliness” policy I was taught to practice good hygiene… But when indolence got the better of me Brushing teeth would be postponed Often, cologne bathing was at work. Remembering those quirks amuses me… I’m grateful to God for my blessed childhood!
*2Corinthians 8:21 Providing for honest things, not only in the sight of the Lord, but also in the sight of men. December 10, 2018 6th place, "Secret" Free Verse Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Faraz Ajmal; judged on 12/29/2018.

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Date: 12/30/2018 11:35:00 AM
Hi Beata, As I said on another one of your poems, I enjoy reading your spiritual writes. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/29/2018 2:26:00 PM
Ahh, it is a really wonderful poem, this is what you call a wonderful childhood, for it has everything, happiness, Innocence and even the pleasure of God, I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours, many congratulations on your well deserved win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 12/10/2018 2:35:00 PM
what a spritely work filled with youth's marked moments, beata...galing galing!...huggs
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Beata Agustin
Date: 12/10/2018 9:19:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks for your compliments. With you giving me gracious comments, I'm humbly honoured. God bless you.
Date: 12/10/2018 8:45:00 AM
Beata, great write, your faith is shining bright ~
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Beata Agustin
Date: 12/10/2018 9:18:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks for your compliments. With you giving me comments, I'm humbly honoured. God bless you.

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