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Your Tender Grip

As I grasp those hands in the still of dark I see my own through yours The ones that fondle my back on tired nights, Squeezing me close to slay my thoughts. Each finger, a real emblem Of our home and family, Embracing, reaching, and assuring. While I scan my hands, I cannot help but be reminded That these I, too, wish to extend Among our four children; Like caresseses of love and rough play. Yours are delicate and soft in shades of light; Never scraping through toils of the days But warm like sunrise awakening. As I rub your coiled fist against mine I feel the grace of life's token That I am an extension of you, Sensing I am never alone While the grip rests on my head as we sleep. Nette Onclaud: With These Hands Contest 12- 16-13 Entry from Manny Paras Visual 1

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Date: 1/15/2014 9:27:00 PM
It is nice Manny, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/7/2014 9:15:00 AM
memorable lyricism, manny.. hope you would write more often.. congrats on your huge award in my contest...thanks too for dropping by.. huggs
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Date: 1/4/2014 6:44:00 AM
Way to go ...Sara
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:09:00 PM
Hi Manny, , congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2014 3:37:00 PM
manny, i never thought of hands this way( as concet for my challenge); beautiful... cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 1/3/2014 8:32:00 AM
This is a very touching piece. Thanks for extending your hands in our direction. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/2/2014 4:25:00 PM
I love how you described hands as connected to family and extended to each member. Congrats, Manny!
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:56:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS,Manny :") !!!!
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Date: 1/2/2014 1:55:00 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM,MANNY - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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Date: 1/2/2014 12:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Manny
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Date: 12/27/2013 12:46:00 PM
This is a beautiful entry. Nette, will love it. thanks for the visual... xox..LINDA
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Date: 12/17/2013 8:01:00 AM
thank you, manny for this one and for visiting my page... huggs
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Date: 12/16/2013 11:58:00 AM
- A deep and beautiful poem, Manny ! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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