Your Sundress

When I woke today, all that could be seen was blackness. The sun did not rise; it killed all my process. Is it the worst damn day? I solemnly profess Pull that blanket back over the stark, empty nothingness. What's another day lost, laying here motionless? You're still lying here next to me; the floor, still wearing your sundress. Is this the best damn day? Of my life, head to feet, with emptiness. Tangled in the void of these blankets and sheets, the two reignite passion, sharing our explosiveness. Let's find that no other space suits us best; let's turn this overcast into our sunshine and happiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Very beautiful, the rhyming is excellent!
Scorpio Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 3:32 AM
Thank you Paige! I do love an overcast day :) A.S.
Turner Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:25 PM
Making the best of a bad day. That's what we do. I really enjoyed reading you today, AS. Hoping you are well!
Scorpio Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Thanks D.T.! Unapologetically I have been missing your critiques and compliments, I am doing well thank you for caring my friend! A.S.
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Sensual and clever.
Scorpio Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 6:57 PM
<3 Thank you! A.S.
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