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Your Son Touches My Face

My eyes look for you, My heart bleeds for you. The truth, my spirit, enters your soul completely. My feet walk toward you My path is thrown in with yours My journey is your journey Your sun touches my face. Your trees sooth my soul. Your earth grows my flowers. I listen, I watch, I wait for you. I listen to your messages, I listen to your children. I listen to your Son. By doing the above Reaching up You complete me Written 3-18-2019 Contest: You Complete Me Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2019 2:44:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/30/2019 4:19:00 PM

Thank you Sara. I appreciate your visit.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2019 10:26:00 PM

Very inspiring and great message behind your write of one's deep felt emotion , Caren , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/28/2019 1:36:00 AM

Thank you Eve. It is appreciated of course. Smile.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/18/2019 4:30:00 PM

Yo, Caren..is there a typo in the title? It says SON. In the body of the poem it says SUN. Am I missing the point? Could be, if so, Sorry. Love Panagiota.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/19/2019 12:33:00 AM

Panagiota, I was SO hoping someone would see this and take note. I should have known it would be you. I did this INTENTIONALLY, to see if you "get" it. I know you do!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/18/2019 11:23:00 AM

Very vibrant in image and depth.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/18/2019 2:19:00 PM

Thank you. This was a very specific prompt. The beginning and ending were James', not my own.