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No torrid steel rod will cauterize my wounds I cannot lick these festering gashes clean Your sharp-bladed tongue has bitten deeply fangs plunged with each vile cursed scene No mere prick or scratch did you inflict as thorns draw drops from a finger laid bare You severed our dangling cord with a stare Without gauntlet thrown before you swayed I was waylaid in the pitfall of vows betrayed I sat weeping upon moistened ground faintly hearing your snarling sound a vile bitterness in your laughter as I stir If you have a conscience, I shall be its burr You turned your back and ran away Now that your cruelty has been done but there is no victory to be claimed by you for there is nothing you have won How often you preyed on others while you played at being sanctimonious Liquid courage brings death that smothers I escaped the hold you once held before my life was snuffed and felled I still breathe and I've no fear to speak It's you who proved to be weak My tongue holds daggers of its own whetted on the grindstone of deception I was hungry for strength, parched with thirst to take vengeance as my anger grew Getting even was long past due But hurting you would label me evil That's the last thing I ever desire to be Vengeance will never be mine to take and accepting that has set me free Years will pass but I'll never forget that I once loved you, yet I sorely regret not realizing the kind of person you are I've moved on and no longer grieve while you still swim in the deep dark waters of your besotted world of make believe

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Date: 10/30/2017 10:21:00 PM
"Whetted on the grindstone of deception" now that is an awesome metaphor, and word pairing, this poem is a tsunami wave of words that pummel everything in it's path. Loved every word....please give us more!!!
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Date: 10/30/2017 5:27:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this incredible write, so very true the pain that words can inflict upon a person! I have been assayed by harsh words before, but like you, I never returned to bite back...it wan't my taste! I really enjoyed reading your second to last stanza this morning, it was very well put! But your entire poem was striking and straight to the point...like an arrow straight to the heart! I wish he could have read this (If it was a he!)! What a spectacular piece, Great Work my friend!!
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Date: 10/30/2017 9:41:00 AM
This could apply to any disagreement based on a foundation of arguments, alcohol incited or not. Thank you for the kudos and detailing which stanza caught your eye the most, Russell.
Date: 10/29/2017 5:38:00 PM
Wow Lin... amazing piece
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Date: 10/30/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thanks very much, Tim.
Date: 10/29/2017 10:48:00 AM
Of tectonic magnitude this sharp penning, WOW! If they didn't feel their world quake I would be surprised.
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Date: 10/30/2017 9:38:00 AM
Earthquakes have been caused by less volatility, Mo. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 10/29/2017 10:47:00 AM
Gee golly Lin you sure pack a punch with every word - so powerfully penned I especially love the 6th stanza. People are lucky if they can escape an abusive relationship especially where 'liquid courage' can make someone turn into a monster and then things can spiral out of control:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2017 9:38:00 AM
Application noted about every word you wrote, Jan. Liquid nitrogen creates a beast. Thanks for pointing out what you specifically liked.

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