Your Precious Love

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~Your Precious Love~ (Tanka) I can see your love in all that you do for me Your dear face I see your love each day I can touch I'm so happy you're with me You're so fine to me and you're so beautiful too Let's get together we can have fun forever so come join me and you'll see You live in my heart Dreaming of you day and night burning my desires My love you're my light and hope so hold me and seal our love Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,14,2015

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Brian Bronson

Date: 1/17/2015 12:40:00 PM

I found this poem beautiful and inspiring! Good work!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/21/2015 8:09:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Brian, for stopping by and commenting. Deeply appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely weekend! In His light! God bless you! :) D "

Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2015 10:34:00 PM

Dorain, a beautiful romantic painting you have painted with your pen. 7 Blessings and hugs dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2015 7:13:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Eve, my dearest friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! Blessings to you to my dear.Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "