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Your Love Light Shines

Your love light shines Your eyes are diamonds that shine so bright Love's glimmer of hope, shone bright in the night Your glance sent my way, shimmered in the expanse I imagined, that, even I, might have a chance A chance that your love's light, on me, could shine I started dreaming that, maybe one day, you could be mine Chorus Your love light shines... Your love light shines... Your love light shines... on me, You illuminate... and my darkness fades... And my sadness, escapes from view... And it's all because of you! You suddenly appeared, and I was paralyzed, As you drew ever near, your diamonds caught my eyes I was drawn to your light, like a moth to the flame And I knew after tonight, things would never be the same Chorus I drew you in close, and we would gently sway We danced to, the rhythm in our hearts, as the music played The moon and the stars, have nothing over you 'Cause when your love light shines there's nothing I can do. Chorus repeat two times fade John Derek Hamilton November 22,2016

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Date: 11/30/2016 11:55:00 AM
John this is so beautiful ... this will be a lovely song. Sending a soup mail ...
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/30/2016 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Rebecca.
Date: 11/23/2016 7:06:00 AM
A lovely love lyric:) John, you're bettering yourself every time:) wow!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/23/2016 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Jo
Date: 11/22/2016 6:55:00 PM
This one is great John. You're gonna mess around and write yourself a Grammy award winner one of these days. I liked this one a lot:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/23/2016 7:46:00 AM
Wow thanks Daniel, I wonder how many songwriters works have never been heard? Could be a lot of good stuff out there untouched. Thanks a lot for your encouragement.
Date: 11/22/2016 10:34:00 AM
This is beautiful John, another impressive love song that I can hear being sung as I read. When is the CD coming out? Let me know, I'll be first in line to buy it.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/22/2016 11:26:00 AM
You are so kind with your comments Chris, much appreciated thanks for making my day!

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