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Your Lips, Are Like An Eclipse

Your Lips Are Like An Eclipse… … and not just Because – It Rhymes… but, when They Cover Mine to Sip They Take The Place of Wine … and Intoxicating Sight and Taste As Your Lips Come to Lay Upon my Brow and Mouth and Face… They Take My Breath Away!… Your Lips Are Like An Eclipse… Passing Slow – Across My Cheek… Your Clean, Sweet, Flavor – Drips Circumventing Surface Speech Your Lips Are Like An Eclipse… … Two - Momentous, Celestial-Signs A Questing Path of Gentle Grips… They Conquer My Throat… and Climb… … Blocking Shy – and Away Shame Slips ‘til A Ring of Desire – Glows Bright… Your Lips Are Like An Eclipse… Turning Day… to Deep Midnight Your Lips Are Like An Eclipse… … and not just Because It Rhymes… For tho’ You’ve Dipped – One-Quick-Trip… … I Eagerly Await Next Time… (… When Your Lips Are An Eclipse Over Mine…)

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Date: 6/29/2013 6:18:00 PM
Now now don't let his lusciousness eclipse YOURS! ;) fav verse [ Blocking Shy – and Away Shame Slips/ ‘til A Ring of Desire – Glows Bright…] Light & Love Tim's Cher Debbie ;)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/29/2013 6:19:00 PM
you couldn't have a better champion!
Date: 9/14/2009 1:56:00 PM
Wonderful read in this poem MoonBee, a joy to read>>James
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Date: 9/1/2009 5:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today MoonBee. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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