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Your Heart Called Out To Me: With Vlad Raven

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Lost beneath the mantle of ancient trees On crumbling road I hope will lead to you Cold and weary, near falling to my knees By lantern light, the world is painted blue Searching for hours to find a sign or trace Of where you are, but not one did I see In anger, left. 'Twas written on your face 'Tis my fear you shall not return to me Darkness enfolds, the night is all around Too late to turn back, a shelter I seek A bed of leaves gathered upon the ground Shall serve well enough on a night so bleak Pinch the wick of lantern flame 'til it dies My thoughts are of you as I close my eyes ~~~ My thoughts are of you as I close my eyes Memories of our Love they do fill my mind In flash of dazzling light peace it belies The Love of our tomorrows that we find The call of your heart to you it has led Now open your eyes and then do behold Your warrior holds you in nature's bed In a land of light kissed by sun of gold But for now my Love we meet within dream For in life I lie in a bloody glen Our Love shall be precious as it may seem As the Love we share when we meet again Your Love shall come and save me with its light I come to you within a cold dark night ~~~ Stirred by sudden warmth pressed upon my cheek The touch of your hand carries in the wind I hear you call in voice desperate and weak In my vision you lay injured and pinned My heart cries in sorrow for now I see Was not in anger you left me behind But to defend our home, our lands and me Forgive me for doubting you. I was blind. The sun rises, giving breath to dawn's light I draw near with each step, soon at your side To tend your wound for you have won the fight Then upon your steed, back home we shall ride Your Love drew me close to you in the glen The reason we are together again ~~~ The power of our Love transcends time and space We return to our great hall together The Aird Righ and his queen of Celtic race Our deep Love it shall go on forever We sit together on our antlered thrones Bedecked are we with our gold and silver Our bards now play music with such light tones As with skill their ancient words deliver I do look upon you my living sun Glory of my heart wonder of my Soul You are my desire our passion does burn As through our night we reach our blissful goal My Love forever my Celtic sunbeam You are my beloved my Celtic dream Written in alliance with Vladislav Raven. Thank you, Mike, for bringing these sonnets to life. May 1st, 2016

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Date: 5/3/2016 1:47:00 PM
Beautifully written..A great collaboration Lin and Vlad...A7..
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/3/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Joseph. ;)
Date: 5/1/2016 5:00:00 PM
Very nice write! A pleasure to read.
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Date: 5/1/2016 6:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. It's so nice of you to comment on it.
Date: 5/1/2016 12:48:00 PM
Hi Lin, an honour and privilege to write with you again. Your words sing to the heart. A beautiful canvas on Love's power. You do make it so easy to write these. The heart cries out and Love goes on. Dreams drift in their dark majesty waiting to be given life and you give them life with enchantment and majesty. You make this write a seven Lin. See you on the next one. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2016 1:13:00 PM
Merci, Mike. You always make it easy to brush a canvas with the right colors, setting, and touches of enchantment.
Date: 5/1/2016 12:24:00 PM
Enchanting write , Lin and Mike. Love the painting you have both created. a7 hug Eve
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Date: 5/1/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve, for such lovely comments. Hugging you back.

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