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Your Greatest Thrill Ever

What's the greatest thrill you've experienced You probably have more than one Try keeping it clean, my dear, dear people This may be read by some young'uns Do you want to know mine, of course you do This goes back to when I was courting My very first kiss, I can still feel the thrill Loved messing around and cavorting Sure blew my whistle as I rounded the bend Snorting and huffing and puffing The top of my head started shooting out steam And I lost a bunch of my stuffing Oh to go back and experience it once more Perhaps that's not such a great idea Wouldn't be satisfied the way things are now Watching movies and eating pizza © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/23/2014 9:58:00 AM
OK Jack, although you cleaned things up by your chose of words, I still got a very visual picture. Gee thanks Jack, : )
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2014 5:56:00 PM
I can send you the unedited version if you'd like! LOL XOXOX
Date: 3/14/2014 5:38:00 PM
Wow! One hell of a thriller!! Hope you're not missing the good old days :) and easy on the pizza...did somebody mention cholesterol :):) // paul
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/14/2014 7:14:00 PM
Yummmm! Love pizza! Forget going back... gonna stay where I am! As if I had a choice! LOL
Date: 3/14/2014 9:32:00 AM
My greatest thrill was finding my Hubby. Crazy old coot can always make me laugh. And he cares about the things I do or at least never complains at my gaffs! It's gotta take a special kind of guy to write poetry with me, at times. And to support me in many of my crazy ideas and bends! A few have been known to back fire! And a few blew up in my face. But all were good intentioned, and he took them in stride with good grace. I was lucky to find him, and yes, Dragon of course. For goodness sake!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/14/2014 9:35:00 AM
You guys are two of the lucky ones... not all tirn out that way!!! Happy for youse! Love to you both and your brood XOXOXOX

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