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You gifted me a sunny day, as rains poured from opaque sky gray, I made to you a fervent plea, a sunny day you gifted me. The bright day held my forlorn hand, took me to an emerald land. My despair sunburst sky dispelled, my forlorn hand the bright day held. The full moon grandly passed me by, stardust showered from satin sky. Telling me you’d be with me soon, grandly passed me by, the full moon. Spring zephyr blew in tuneful surge, your gift of joy charmed me with urge. In my heart grew the yearning new, in tuneful surge spring zephyr blew. _______________ September 6, 2022 Syllable count : 8 per line (HMS) Rhyme checked with RhymeZone.com Contest : Swap Quatrain Sponsored by : Emile Pinet

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Date: 9/6/2022 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Well written Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/6/2022 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi for your nice comment.
Date: 9/6/2022 12:29:00 AM
Lovely write! I wish you the best of luck in the contest, a winner for sure!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/6/2022 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Anna for your visit and for the encouraging comment.
Date: 9/5/2022 11:53:00 PM
This is such a beautiful poem. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Your words a so expressive. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/5/2022 11:57:00 PM
Thank you, Julie for your encouraging comments and for liking the poem. Welcome to PS after a long time.

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