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“Your Finest Hour”
pour a paint can from isolation a heart torn blood spills Red on the crushed White empty now absorbed in the mother vein
Stop.
a tall tree, Green, waiting, so is life and dreams she always speaks of a beautiful future fresh, romantic notions words are always running diamond Silver streams of something always better, Golden, Bright Blue skies - what was lost was stolen, to somehow be retrieved not now red apples rolling down the mountain climbed long and hard bitter seeds,like bricks held in an apron, red apples scattered rolling to an Ocean
Time.
What is worthy in the future is worth something now; “Look in thy glass and tell the face thou viewest now is the time that face should form another” from the broken Tarot Tower "...calls back the lovely April of her prime" thou art thy mother’s glass and she in thee stops at Red and reads your painted codex, stoic emblazoned with potent power Silenced, in this dark time and proud dear daughter, winning the Game in this, your finest hour (LadyLabyrinth / 2020) for my daughter, Georgia with love, your mother.
"and now our parents are long departed who can finish the songs they started?”
Artwork: Georgia Murcell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/2/2022 3:24:00 PM
Sonnet III http://www.shakespeares- sonnets.com/sonnet/3
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Date: 11/2/2022 3:22:00 PM
“A Knife in the Ocean” / Foal - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-n4U2KZZVs
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Date: 11/2/2022 3:23:00 PM
Lyrics / “A Knife in the Ocean” Foal - https://genius.com/Foals-a-knife-in-the-ocean-lyrics
Date: 3/30/2020 10:30:00 AM
Spectacular write LL. I see where we are now and wish there was a time machine. Lol. Kelli
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Date: 3/30/2020 3:12:00 PM
Too kind, thank you. I wrote it in response to art work my daughter sent me, my interpretation. We are at great distance, but there is so much love and that gives a person incredible strength to survive the worst of life and embrace the best. The world is a hell of a scary place at present, but we all will hopefully become stronger and stand united throughout the history of this monster, with hopefully, a better understanding of what is truly good, inside of all of us. xx
Date: 3/30/2020 7:06:00 AM
Stories written in everything we do, they do, it all matters as do we.... lead the children to water and teache them how to swim. They will do us proud.
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Date: 3/30/2020 3:10:00 PM
Love collaboration between mother and daughter, through isolation and distance. My daughter has been swimming far from shore, long distance in deep water with the sharks for quite some time; Georgia, is a true survivor, she has come this far, she will go further. I have great faith in that occurring. Georgia, is her own person, in so many ways, stronger than I am. But I am always with her...in one way, or another. Georgia, has a lot of the LUX VITAE shining through her veins.xx

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