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Your Feminine

As mine duke's open slithers 'bout yourn adam's rib Unto your cambered hips Mine eyne remain look locked As my torso's limbs pull yourn 'gainst mine

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/20/2021 6:08:00 PM

Enjoyed this piece James. So you have a graduate. How wonderful my congrats to Noah. If i remember his name correctly. I noticed Andre's comment. love phyl

James Peranteau
Date: 5/28/2021 6:48:00 AM

Who could forget Noah my dear poet...yeeeehaaaa! It's just the start uv thingz to come! But I thank Jehovah God Almighty in Jesus Christ's name that thoze first 18 yearz have come and gone...now 4 the fun part! Have a blessed Spring phyllis! much love, jamez

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2021 3:29:00 PM

your one track mind doth put forth more sexy poetry!! haha!! Thanks for telling me about the graduate. My congrats to him.

James Peranteau
Date: 5/28/2021 7:24:00 AM

Vide supra; my comment 'bout Noah to Phyllis :) Oh, how the, H E double toothpicks do I update my profile photo, must I pay for this awesome privilege now?

James Peranteau
Date: 5/28/2021 7:04:00 AM

Hey vooman(my dear poet) it may b one track; yet, I've had much success on that track ;] I hopes ya doesn't thinks that I made up all uv theze writes here on poetrysoup. It's said that; a great writer writes from experience, I have high aspirations Andrea *) Enjoy your Spring...much love, james