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Your Emotions

As I peer into your essence, deeper than the deepest oceans filled with frothy effervescence; drifting with your changing notions is the breath of your emotions. Sometimes making passions quiver then at times they leave a shiver; e’er exchanging, rearranging signals that your heart delivers with emotions ever changing.
May 13, 2020

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Date: 6/1/2020 5:53:00 PM
Well observed...the flow of emotions
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo. A woman’s emotions seem to always be changing. Just my observation. John
Date: 5/22/2020 7:48:00 AM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/22/2020 9:17:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest. Hugs, John
Date: 5/21/2020 2:09:00 AM
I would have had this much higher on the list John, but what matters is it is on the winning list to be seen and read! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/21/2020 7:13:00 AM
What matters to me is that people read it and enjoy it, that’s the reason I write. I appreciate your thoughts and comments so much, Connie. Hugs, John
Date: 5/20/2020 12:10:00 AM
The highs and lows of emotions so beautifully penned. Congratulations on your placement John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/20/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/19/2020 2:19:00 PM
Emotions so wonderfully highlighted and expressed, John. You really cover the waterfront in your winning dizain. Congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, Sam, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/18/2020 5:21:00 AM
Truly an excellent Dizain John. It flows so smoothly! I hope it is a top winner for you! Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments and visit, Connie, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 5/14/2020 9:35:00 PM
Vintage Gondolf, if I may say so: Pristine, pure, elegant! Bravo, John! :) gw
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/16/2020 8:15:00 PM
I completely agree. : ) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/15/2020 7:07:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comment, Gershon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/14/2020 2:18:00 PM
Emotions will always be- forever changing. You express this so beautifully. I think it depends on the mood, the situation. In fact, I know it does. Keep smiling my dear sweet friend. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/14/2020 3:59:00 PM
This is so true my friend, the trick is to try and figure out in advance what the mood is so you know what to expect. Stay safe Brandy. Hugs, John
Date: 5/14/2020 12:04:00 AM
Have never tried this form John but I thoroughly enjoyed your Dizain style of poetry well penned my friend, have honestly missed your friendly face on my poetry page. Hugs, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/14/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you, Jenn, I appreciate you and your comments. I will stop by your page later today. Hugs, John

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