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Your Christmas Fir

Your Christmas fir was small and new, When planted in the ground for you; Once potbound, then its roots were free. You stroked its branches, cuddled me: I thought it felt like déjà vu. I watched it as it slowly grew, Though evergreen, its air was blue, Not happy as it used to be, Your Christmas fir. Your love was dying, yes, I knew, But what was I supposed to do? Each time we fought, so sad to see, All seemed reflected in the tree; It turned to brown when we were through, Your Christmas fir. *The fir I'd planted started off well, but soon looked sorry for itself, and died after the relationship ended

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful write Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:44:00 PM
What an interesting write Jack. Thoroughly enjoyed. Congrats
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:45:00 PM
An excellent write Jack.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/3/2012 11:16:00 PM
Jack-While quite deep and sad...This is such a fantastic write. Flows beautifully! A big congrats.!
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:49:00 PM
A tree mirroring a life is powerful stuff, Jack...loved the double meanings laced through out. Must fav this one for it"s excellence. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/14/2011 6:00:00 PM
That is neat'o how you related your relationship with the growth of the tree.You found an awesome form for expressing your ideas!!
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Date: 12/14/2011 4:55:00 PM
What a Fantastic write here Jack! You have combined with terrific wit the relationship of someone and one love with the tree! Done exquisitely! Love it! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/14/2011 2:31:00 PM
Sorry for the double loss in your life..Those things stay with us even though we have moved on..Enjoyed reading your work..If for the contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2011 1:05:00 PM
Such a sad story, but a lovely poem, Jack. Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:29:00 AM
This is truly a beautiful and touching rondeau, Jack. I like the way the life of the tree represented the life of your relationship. Best wishes in the rondeau contest with this moving poem, my friend. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:25:00 AM
Oh thats sad. x
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