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I write upon your birthday, when it's always hard, recalling celebrations in the past; my memories are bitter-sweet - I cannot love or hate, and try to stop my daily thoughts from getting blue  (it's really time I got on with my life). My thinking of your words will always twist the knife; I can't forget the day you said, 'We're through.' I have to blame it on my fate. I didn't think you'd cheat; and thought our love was strong enough to last. No chance to send another birthday card! I wonder if my heart will be forever scarred - I watched it go from good to bad so fast; but once you'd made my life complete, (not like this sorry state, when all I do these days is cry and think of you). I must accept that now you're not my wife! * how I used to feel...many years ago! written 28th January for Constance's 'I write upon' contest

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Date: 2/15/2021 10:16:00 AM
Hi Jack, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:24:00 AM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
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Date: 2/4/2021 3:19:00 PM
Unfortunately such a memory cannot be erased, my friend. It must have been hard to deal with. Glad you moved on. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/1/2021 10:42:00 AM
Such a sad poem of a lost love, who hurt you, your heart was broken and "forever scarred' - 'I must accept that now you're not my wife'. Love is on the horizon, look at Elias and I, after 25 years when we first went out, unknown to each other, both of us divorced, and Elias phoned me out of the blue, 6 months later we were married and celebrated our 20th wedding anniversary in December. Your Lady is there, you just have to find her, fate awaits you in a truly romantic journey. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/30/2021 6:44:00 AM
So Sad Jack. I do hope you find someone one day..All the best Harry
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Date: 1/29/2021 12:05:00 PM
As I recall, Sue's timing in leaving you came two weeks after your father died. Sure, it was devastating, but I'm glad you have moved on. There must be a special lady waiting for a kind, intelligent man like you. Hugs, Carolyn (Best wishes in the contest!)
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Date: 1/28/2021 6:11:00 PM
Well written on a bitter love situation, Jack.. Yes, that does happen hoping it will end. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/28/2021 5:18:00 PM
a scenario that is all to common my friend, such a touching piece... so glad you have moved on!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:51:00 PM
Creative way to go for the contest. Good to get on with our lives when we have no control of a situation. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:42:00 PM
This is such a deeply emotional piece Jack. I think there are many who can identify with this one. Very well expressed and lots of emotion. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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