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Our young Martin was out in the snow Despite the cold, his face was aglow, A sight never forgot A snowman he liked not, Why upside down he wanted to know? Poor young Martin, despite being wee, So curious he went on his knee. The carrot seemed so low Asked mum in voice so slow “Is that how all those cold snowmen pee?” 28 February 2021 Two Limericks - Let's have some Fun! Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Placed 1 Checked rhymes with Rhymezone Checked syllables with How Many Syllables.com 9 - 9 -6 -6 - 9

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Date: 6/4/2022 3:59:00 AM
This is so very funny ! Enjoyed young martin's innocence.... The picture is so very illustrative.... !
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Date: 5/6/2022 10:52:00 AM
A late congrats on this winner. Way to go. Your visits to my page always encourage. Sara
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Date: 3/20/2021 2:59:00 PM
hey, you did really great in the contest, Victor. BIG congrats. the last part is so funny.
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Date: 3/20/2021 3:51:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your first place win with your hilarious limericks!
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Date: 3/19/2021 8:33:00 PM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/19/2021 3:49:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Victor:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2021 10:17:00 AM
hahaha... that is great Victor made me laugh out loud...good luck in the contest my friend ~ Ann xx
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Date: 3/1/2021 9:14:00 PM
Lol! Victor, Both Limericks are good. The little boy's question caused me to laugh out loud. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/1/2021 12:38:00 PM
Loved reading this one, Victor. Made me smile :)
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Date: 3/1/2021 7:36:00 AM
Oh Victor what a laugh, love the Limericks ~~ Belle
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Date: 3/1/2021 1:52:00 AM
Great pair of lims Victor, youve certainly mastered the form, you're now a limerickeer. Tom
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Date: 2/28/2021 11:37:00 PM
Great limerick , Victor, it should sure win. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment and congratulations. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/28/2021 7:09:00 PM
HA Ha. really good one, Victor
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Date: 2/28/2021 6:39:00 PM
Oh! Clever ones, Victor:) I'm still laughing:)
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Date: 2/28/2021 2:40:00 PM
Very clever poem. If I said what this snowman reminded me of, I might offend a few people on this site; especially if they happened to be Christians.
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Date: 2/28/2021 1:34:00 PM
This is too cute Victor andd the pic is perfect. I know if it doesn't win it will definitely place high. Good stuff God Bless, JB.
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Date: 2/28/2021 8:18:00 AM
Creative way to go. I guess for a contest since you checked out everything. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 2/28/2021 5:53:00 AM
Hello, cool poem; God bless; -JT
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Date: 2/28/2021 4:58:00 AM
LOL! I could see a kid saying this! Great!
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Date: 2/28/2021 4:15:00 AM
absolutely hilarious Victor, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2021 4:06:00 AM
Skillfully executed, Victor! The ending line is LOL humorous.
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Date: 2/28/2021 3:12:00 AM
:))) ... well done, Victor :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2021 2:57:00 AM
Good one. Thanks for the laugh. Take care, Rama
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