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Young Man's First Love

At the gate of adolescence boy meets girl; a real jewel but she clearly ranks second. He spends time grooming another favorite and buys expensive gifts for her, like custom wheels. In times away from her, he’ll mutter with worry of how she might could suffer harm without him. Might she disappear like a shadow from his sight?

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Date: 3/24/2025 11:09:00 PM
Very nice and congrats.
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Date: 3/27/2025 12:43:00 PM
thanks, Andrea for commenting.
Date: 3/24/2025 2:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, R.A.P. :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs
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Date: 3/24/2025 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, enjoyed your piece here too and left you a comment.

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