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You'D See What I See

I’m looking at the starlit sky... and it makes me think of you... the stars aligned like you and me I wonder if you would agree... if you looked through my bespectacled eyes you'd see what I see... two bodies with moves of their own two minds with thoughts of their own two souls mould into one two hearts beating as one with laughter as our guide communication as our gauge trust as our companion and love? well love as our continuum...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 11:18:00 AM

Good morning, WILMA ;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA

Nate Spears

Date: 3/6/2013 2:47:00 PM

Nice Poem....

Daver Austin

Date: 3/4/2013 2:25:00 PM

Good stuff, Wilma. I think you guys are gonna make it. daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/4/2010 12:59:00 AM

I really needed to read an uplifting write like this one, Wilma :) just thinking of stars, laughter & hearts could do that I suppose--haha I must admit I myself was affected by what I just wrote--I got inspired to write that today then I felt deflated afterwards--silly me--honestly it made me teary eyed to write that, gosh...I need more inspiration! thanks for your comments & this poem--now I'm back stuck in a rut--what did I get myself into??

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/3/2010 11:10:00 AM

The last line is priceless and I love the unique form in this well written poem, Wilma! Love, Carolyn