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You Will Shine

Delicately I fall, to allow the sense of time being slowed down I want to bring you both the softness and stillness I am quiet, so that you may find peace in the silence I put on a show so that you can watch each flake twirl to the ground I let the wind drift me so that you can see not everything is even I am a chance to appreciate the beauty in my waves on the ground Mountain tops I cover, so they shine brighter in the sun To catch your attention, show how high you can climb the ladder of life I want to remind you, if it comes from the beauty of your soul; You will shine just like me – I am the snow – Heidi Sands 1/16/23

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Date: 1/17/2023 7:30:00 AM
A wonderful personification Heidi! You have done a wonderful job of capturing the spirit, the purity, and the amazement of the gift that nature has given us!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/17/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Sotto :)
Date: 1/17/2023 4:05:00 AM
A beautiful personification Heidi! You have captured the essence, the innocence and the wonder of nature's gift! Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/17/2023 4:07:00 AM
Hi Mike. Thank you so much! Happy Tuesday xxoo :)
Date: 1/16/2023 12:22:00 PM
A lovely write. Love your last line. "You will shine just like me – I am the snow –" Have a blessed day/week..............
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2023 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I decided to have fun with personification form today :)

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