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Perfect teeth, your lips that are always blessing, Wanderlust that always stops short of leaving Moss-green eyes that always spin sparkling myst’ries Once were my treasures

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2019 8:04:00 AM

Beautiful, with a tinge of sadness, Andrew. Definitely a deserved win...congratulations! Regards // paul

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/14/2019 10:58:00 AM

Thank You! My sweet wife passed away eighteen months ago.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:39:00 PM

Oh I love this. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/13/2019 9:10:00 PM

Thank You!

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/13/2019 7:01:00 PM

I like this better than mine. Congrats on your win.

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/13/2019 9:06:00 PM

Thank You! That's very generous, as yours is so well done! I like yours very much!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/13/2019 12:42:00 PM

"Wanderlust that always stops short of leaving" --- that is a great line in any poem, exceptional in this form! Another lovely write from your very talented pen. Congratulations, dear poet :)

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/15/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank You so much! You are always kind! :-)

Craig Cornish

Date: 2/13/2019 10:15:00 AM

Andrew, this write was a "treasure" and perfect for a romantic valentine - to win her back perhaps.

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/13/2019 11:15:00 AM

Thank You for your kindness!