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Perfect teeth, your lips that are always blessing,
Wanderlust that always stops short of leaving
Moss-green eyes that always spin sparkling myst’ries
Once were my treasures

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Paul Callus

February 14, 2019 at 8:04 AM

Beautiful, with a tinge of sadness, Andrew. Definitely a deserved win...congratulations! Regards // paul

Andrew Fairchild

February 14, 2019 at 10:58 AM

Thank You! My sweet wife passed away eighteen months ago.

Andrea Dietrich

February 13, 2019 at 8:39 PM

Oh I love this. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Andrew Fairchild

February 13, 2019 at 9:10 PM

Thank You!

Rob Carmack

February 13, 2019 at 7:01 PM

I like this better than mine. Congrats on your win.

Andrew Fairchild

February 13, 2019 at 9:06 PM

Thank You! That's very generous, as yours is so well done! I like yours very much!

P.S. Awtry

February 13, 2019 at 12:42 PM

"Wanderlust that always stops short of leaving" --- that is a great line in any poem, exceptional in this form! Another lovely write from your very talented pen. Congratulations, dear poet :)

Andrew Fairchild

February 15, 2019 at 2:36 PM

Thank You so much! You are always kind! :-)