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You see my life You see me struggle You laugh watching Hoping I will fall What you don't know This is just the beginning A rise of a successful, Beautiful life Continue to watch at your will As you will see I will never fail

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Date: 4/25/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/23/2024 9:01:00 PM
Very encouraging! Welcome to poetrysoup!
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