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Decided to include a portion of the audio(that would fit). I'm not a performer/ singer, but just to include the melody...
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You Promised Me Vs.1) Up again, in the night No sound, no sight Only thoughts endlessly through my mind I see your smile…I see your face And I just can't erase all the plans that we . Made for our lives Chorus) You promised me you said Forever but instead, here I am All alone in the night. Vs.2.) Another day, to get through Without love…without you Just one step at a time…I'll get by But I miss how we'd laugh at the drop of a hat, and I can't even smile anymore. Chorus) You promised me… you said, forever but instead, here I am taking one step at a time Vs.3. I'll be fine, yes I will Cause I have some hope still That one day all the pain will be gone Time heals wounds…or so they say But I just can't see the way My heart will heal without the piece you stole away Chorus) You promised me you said. Forever but instead…here I am… holding the pieces of my heart!

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Date: 6/15/2024 5:22:00 AM
Sad, melancholy song Crystol. Deffo a classic country ballad. I'll try to paste the link
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/15/2024 1:31:00 PM
Love listening to your voice. You keep posting your art dear Crystol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/15/2024 11:00:00 AM
Also able to upload "The Secret Side of You" audio today!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/15/2024 10:15:00 AM
Oh man! I spent all day yesterday trying to post that audio, changed the name, trimmed it 4 times, finally got it right and it would not upload! Me and tech do not get along! Thx for trying... if I work it out I'll msg you.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/15/2024 5:30:00 AM
When you click on the link it says access has to be requested so idk

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