You Never Left

"I carry your heart with me(I carry it in my heart)I am never without it" Quote _ by E.E. Cummings rain-filled clouds envelop the wistful sky, but peeps the crescent moon.. not a day has passed, I didn't miss your smile with a twinkle in the eyes, waves lap on the amber shore telling you never left! September 3, 2022 Writing Challenge- In My Heart- S Forms - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme: Lost To Heaven (Brother) Syllables (14-14-16) checked by HMS.com SECOND PLACE

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2022 4:37:00 AM

I feel the pain contained in these lines. Good to see it in the winners' list. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2022 9:16:00 AM

Mala, a wonderful Sijo and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, the love for your brother touched my heart, Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/7/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thanks, Constance. I really enjoy taking part in your contests. I feel honoured and appreciated with your placement.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/3/2022 3:45:00 PM

Hello Mala, e.e. cummings is anther of my fav. poet. I Carry Your Hear tis my fav. poem.. Love& Friendship Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2022 6:54:00 AM

Hello Mala, I am sorr yto hear this. You know that he is in a better place. Watching over you. Love & Friendship, Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/3/2022 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Lost my brother last year - but I feel he has never left. Love and friendship ~ Mala